Darlene De Beaulieu Poet Free verse

Sleep Walking

Gail was very tired
A rough day at work
She went to bed early
To get a good rest

Her husband Willy 
Soon followed her
Both in deep slumber
It did not take long

Wendy got out of bed
She went to the dresser
Opened her jewellery box
Then changed her earrings 
light 
In the morning light
She went to the mirror
She noticed a change
Two earrings in one ear

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Kai Michael Neumann December 1, 2019 at 8:59 AM Very funny. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai Darlene De Beaulieu December 1, 2019 at 2:23 PM Hello Kai Micheal Neumann,tk you.Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Arjun Jangid October 11, 2019 at 7:46 PM I am enjoying your lovely poem. Darlene De Beaulieu October 12, 2019 at 7:17 AM Hello Arjun,I am happy to hear this. I work very hard onmy poetry. Thank you forthe lovely comment. have a nice day my friend Arjun,

Swarup Mohalik October 8, 2019 at 10:13 PM oops...I almost missed that :-) Keen and cute thoughts. All the best and keep us smiling :-) -- Wendy and Gail - are they same or different? Or is it deliberate to give the sleep-walker a different persona? I do not suggest any change. Let it evoke the thoughts. After all, that is the mandate of poems. No? Darlene De Beaulieu October 9, 2019 at 9:11 AM Hello Swarup Mohalik,It is to give the sleep walker a different persona.Yes I will evoke the thought.Yes it is the mandate poems. yes. have a nice day my friend.

William Kelii Kekaula September 27, 2019 at 5:38 AM LOL, the end twist made me laugh ~ Aloha always William Darlene De Beaulieu September 27, 2019 at 9:08 AM Hello William Kekaula, yes when you really think about it, it is funny. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend . Aloha Darlene

Richard Lamoureux September 22, 2019 at 9:02 AM You have a nice day as well. Hugs Rick. Darlene De Beaulieu September 22, 2019 at 10:20 AM Thank you Rick, I will try very hard even though today i am very up set. I have to clear my thoughts. Have a nice day my friend. hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos September 20, 2019 at 12:50 PM You gave me my smile for the day - sleep walking - I'm told one doesn't remember much when it happens - cute poem. Hugs and blessings Darlene. Jennifer. Darlene De Beaulieu September 20, 2019 at 5:13 PM Hello Jennifer,I am so pleased that you got a smile from this poem. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene

Alexis Y. September 18, 2019 at 12:19 PM Hi Darlene, I don't think I've ever done that. But how would I know if I was sleep walking? I enjoyed the read. Have a fantastic day my friend:-) Alexis Darlene De Beaulieu September 18, 2019 at 12:45 PM Hello Allexis Y.,My sister id it when she was 14 years old. She was very surprised when she looked in the mirror. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux September 18, 2019 at 10:19 AM Ha ha, cute. Darlene De Beaulieu September 18, 2019 at 12:11 PM Hello Richard, you made me giggled. Thank you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs. Darlene

Nuzhat Shireen September 18, 2019 at 12:07 AM The poem got smile on my face. Beautifully written. Darlene De Beaulieu September 18, 2019 at 7:49 AM Hello Nuzhat Shireen, oh I am so pleased. I hope that all is well with you. Have a nice day my friend.

Constance La France September 17, 2019 at 7:56 PM Darlene, I enjoyed your poem a lot. I think I have actually done that. Darlene De Beaulieu September 18, 2019 at 7:51 AM Hello Dear Heart,I am so pleased that you have enjoyed my poem.I hope all is well with you. Have a nice day my friend.

Judy Ball September 17, 2019 at 12:53 PM This made me smile. It's amazing what we do when we are asleep. My husband says I talk in my sleep. I really like this. God Bless, JB Darlene De Beaulieu September 17, 2019 at 2:32 PM Hello Judy Ball, thank you Judy,my sister would sleep walk to the mirror and put two earrings into one ear. In the morning she would be shocked. Have a nice day my friend.

Silent One September 16, 2019 at 5:55 AM Nice poem Dalrlene.. I hope you are well. Darlene De Beaulieu September 16, 2019 at 9:54 AM Hello Silent One,Thank you Silent One, yes I am well. I hope you are to. Have a nice day my friend.