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Sleep Walking

Gail was very tired A rough day at work She went to bed early To get a good rest Her husband Willy Soon followed her Both in deep slumber It did not take long Wendy got out of bed She went to the dresser Opened her jewellery box Then changed her earrings light In the morning light She went to the mirror She noticed a change Two earrings in one ear

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 12/1/2019 8:59:00 AM

Very funny. Nice one. Kind wishes, Kai

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/1/2019 2:23:00 PM

Hello Kai Micheal Neumann,tk you.Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend.

Arjun Jangid

Date: 10/11/2019 7:46:00 PM

I am enjoying your lovely poem.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/12/2019 7:17:00 AM

Hello Arjun,I am happy to hear this. I work very hard onmy poetry. Thank you forthe lovely comment. have a nice day my friend Arjun,

Swarup Mohalik

Date: 10/8/2019 10:13:00 PM

oops...I almost missed that :-) Keen and cute thoughts. All the best and keep us smiling :-) -- Wendy and Gail - are they same or different? Or is it deliberate to give the sleep-walker a different persona? I do not suggest any change. Let it evoke the thoughts. After all, that is the mandate of poems. No?

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/9/2019 9:11:00 AM

Hello Swarup Mohalik,It is to give the sleep walker a different persona.Yes I will evoke the thought.Yes it is the mandate poems. yes. have a nice day my friend.

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/27/2019 5:38:00 AM

LOL, the end twist made me laugh ~ Aloha always William

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/27/2019 9:08:00 AM

Hello William Kekaula, yes when you really think about it, it is funny. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend . Aloha Darlene

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/22/2019 9:02:00 AM

You have a nice day as well. Hugs Rick.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/22/2019 10:20:00 AM

Thank you Rick, I will try very hard even though today i am very up set. I have to clear my thoughts. Have a nice day my friend. hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/20/2019 12:50:00 PM

You gave me my smile for the day - sleep walking - I'm told one doesn't remember much when it happens - cute poem. Hugs and blessings Darlene. Jennifer.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/20/2019 5:13:00 PM

Hello Jennifer,I am so pleased that you got a smile from this poem. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/18/2019 12:19:00 PM

Hi Darlene, I don't think I've ever done that. But how would I know if I was sleep walking? I enjoyed the read. Have a fantastic day my friend:-) Alexis

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2019 12:45:00 PM

Hello Allexis Y.,My sister id it when she was 14 years old. She was very surprised when she looked in the mirror. Thank you for the lovely comment. have a nice day my friend.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/18/2019 10:19:00 AM

Ha ha, cute.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2019 12:11:00 PM

Hello Richard, you made me giggled. Thank you. Thank you for the lovely comment. Have a nice day my friend. Hugs. Darlene

Nuzhat Shireen

Date: 9/18/2019 12:07:00 AM

The poem got smile on my face. Beautifully written.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2019 7:49:00 AM

Hello Nuzhat Shireen, oh I am so pleased. I hope that all is well with you. Have a nice day my friend.

Constance La France

Date: 9/17/2019 7:56:00 PM

Darlene, I enjoyed your poem a lot. I think I have actually done that.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/18/2019 7:51:00 AM

Hello Dear Heart,I am so pleased that you have enjoyed my poem.I hope all is well with you. Have a nice day my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 9/17/2019 12:53:00 PM

This made me smile. It's amazing what we do when we are asleep. My husband says I talk in my sleep. I really like this. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/17/2019 2:32:00 PM

Hello Judy Ball, thank you Judy,my sister would sleep walk to the mirror and put two earrings into one ear. In the morning she would be shocked. Have a nice day my friend.

Silent One

Date: 9/16/2019 5:55:00 AM

Nice poem Dalrlene.. I hope you are well.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/16/2019 9:54:00 AM

Hello Silent One,Thank you Silent One, yes I am well. I hope you are to. Have a nice day my friend.