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Just an experiment to see if I could rhyme (or near rhyme) Each word of each couplet. Each 2 lines rhyme in every word! I think it makes enough sense to call it a cohesive poem.

Sleep sweet boy


Sleep tight your mom guards thee
Keep light for song bards be


Singing to you all through dreams
Bringing true blue fall moon beams


Don't take breath from dear sweet boy
Won't wake yet,come near, meet joy
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Edmonds  Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 2:24 PM
Very good Crystol, I like verse that rhymes, your couplets do that perfectly, line by line… Beryl
Woods Avatar
February 13, 2025 at 8:24 AM
Tysm! It was something I wanted to try. Xo
Mcconnell Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 3:22 AM
Good penning Crystal, I write mostly rhyme myself so I really love rhyming pieces. Keep rhyming! Take care,Gordon
Woods Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 6:23 AM
Thanks! I was hoping to make it all smoothly go together... not sure i met that goal but I like the idea! Xo
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