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Just an experiment to see if I could rhyme (or near rhyme) Each word of each couplet. Each 2 lines rhyme in every word! I think it makes enough sense to call it a cohesive poem.

Sleep sweet boy


Sleep tight your mom guards thee
Keep light for song bards be


Singing to you all through dreams
Bringing true blue fall moon beams


Don't take breath from dear sweet boy
Won't wake yet,come near, meet joy
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Date: 2/13/2025 8:03:00 AM
The longing and yearning for your son is a recurrent theme in your poetry. For now, he sleeps in peace until the great day - John 5:28,29
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/13/2025 8:40:00 AM
I try not to think of it from a "church" standpoint. I simply believe what Jesus believes - John 11:11-14
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/13/2025 8:23:00 AM
Thank you for your encouragement and counsel. We have slightly different understanding of scriptures in this area but I know your a brother in Christ who loves the Lord, that's what matters to me. Whether he sleeps or waits, we will meet again! With love in Christ, C xo
Date: 2/12/2025 2:24:00 PM
Very good Crystol, I like verse that rhymes, your couplets do that perfectly, line by line… Beryl
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/13/2025 8:24:00 AM
Tysm! It was something I wanted to try. Xo
Date: 2/12/2025 3:22:00 AM
Good penning Crystal, I write mostly rhyme myself so I really love rhyming pieces. Keep rhyming! Take care,Gordon
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Crystol Woods
Date: 2/12/2025 6:23:00 AM
Thanks! I was hoping to make it all smoothly go together... not sure i met that goal but I like the idea! Xo
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