Jan Allison Poet Footle

Sleep Footles

Can’t sleep
Counts sheep

Shuts eyes
And thighs (LOL)

Him snore
Won’t score

So tired
Inspired

Gets up
Tea cup

Tablet?
Not yet

Lies down
Big frown

Needs loo
Have to

Get up
Use butt

Bed time
Divine

I snore
Once more

Jan Allison
29th August 2014

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Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2014 at 5:11 PM hahaha, this is one of my favorites of all the story footles I have seen. GREAT job with this set, Jan. use butt was sure interesting!! Jan Allison August 30, 2014 at 5:18 PM LOL Andrea I do have so much fun with these!Get up use butt was better than need poo use loo! :-) Hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne August 29, 2014 at 8:03 PM the footle queen does it again. Great one Jan, loved it. Jan Allison August 30, 2014 at 4:55 AM Always a pleasure to hear from you Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx

Toquyen Harrell August 29, 2014 at 7:48 PM Lol, it's bed time. You'd better go to bed early and no score haha Jan Allison August 30, 2014 at 4:54 AM LOL Hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance August 29, 2014 at 7:01 PM hahaaha and the queen strikes again :) fun fun ;) Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 7:08 PM LOL I have handed Tim back to you so it is now just my naughtiness showing through I guess Casarah - he is i amazing to write with we had great fun. Hugs Jan xxx

David Brown August 29, 2014 at 3:41 PM Sweet and funny, thanks for making me smile :) Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 3:42 PM My pleasure David thank you for taking the time to comment:-) Hugs jan xx

James Fraser August 29, 2014 at 3:33 PM Another Footle Gem Jan, nice one - James... Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 3:37 PM James if you have time do check out 'and then I kissed him' written with Tim Smith - my favourite footles I've helped write:-) :-) Hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick August 29, 2014 at 3:11 PM Just can't get fixed in that bed..Way to Footle..Thanks for the visit..Sara Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 3:14 PM Thanks Sara for the lovely comment as ever:-) hugs Jan xx

Carolyn Devonshire August 29, 2014 at 2:12 PM Dear Jan, This form is contagious and you do it so well! In just a few words you've told an entire story. Excellent, my friend. Love, Carolyn Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 2:15 PM I do try and write other forms but for a bit of fun this is great:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith August 29, 2014 at 12:49 PM He's out....no doubt......I weep....no sleep......good night...sleep tight......fantastic Jan.....hugs Tim Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 2:14 PM the shuts eyes and thighs made me giggle:-) Hugs Jan xxx Tim Smith August 29, 2014 at 1:31 PM Me too...lol...hence falling a sleep on the train...loved him snore....no score...lol Jan Allison August 29, 2014 at 1:25 PM Hubby can realx and go to sleep at the drop of a hat wish I could:-) Hugs Jan xxx