Sleep Footles

Can’t sleep
Counts sheep

Shuts eyes
And thighs (LOL)

Him snore
Won’t score

So tired
Inspired

Gets up
Tea cup

Tablet?
Not yet

Lies down
Big frown

Needs loo
Have to

Get up
Use butt

Bed time
Divine

I snore
Once more

Jan Allison
29th August 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/30/2014 5:11:00 PM
hahaha, this is one of my favorites of all the story footles I have seen. GREAT job with this set, Jan. use butt was sure interesting!!
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Date: 8/30/2014 5:18:00 PM
LOL Andrea I do have so much fun with these!Get up use butt was better than need poo use loo! :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2014 8:03:00 PM
the footle queen does it again. Great one Jan, loved it.
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:55:00 AM
Always a pleasure to hear from you Maurice:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2014 7:48:00 PM
Lol, it's bed time. You'd better go to bed early and no score haha
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Date: 8/30/2014 4:54:00 AM
LOL Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2014 7:01:00 PM
hahaaha and the queen strikes again :) fun fun ;)
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Date: 8/29/2014 7:08:00 PM
LOL I have handed Tim back to you so it is now just my naughtiness showing through I guess Casarah - he is i amazing to write with we had great fun. Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 8/29/2014 3:41:00 PM
Sweet and funny, thanks for making me smile :)
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:42:00 PM
My pleasure David thank you for taking the time to comment:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 8/29/2014 3:33:00 PM
Another Footle Gem Jan, nice one - James...
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:37:00 PM
James if you have time do check out 'and then I kissed him' written with Tim Smith - my favourite footles I've helped write:-) :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2014 3:11:00 PM
Just can't get fixed in that bed..Way to Footle..Thanks for the visit..Sara
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Date: 8/29/2014 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara for the lovely comment as ever:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/29/2014 2:12:00 PM
Dear Jan, This form is contagious and you do it so well! In just a few words you've told an entire story. Excellent, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2014 2:15:00 PM
I do try and write other forms but for a bit of fun this is great:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 8/29/2014 12:49:00 PM
He's out....no doubt......I weep....no sleep......good night...sleep tight......fantastic Jan.....hugs Tim
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Date: 8/29/2014 2:14:00 PM
the shuts eyes and thighs made me giggle:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 8/29/2014 1:31:00 PM
Me too...lol...hence falling a sleep on the train...loved him snore....no score...lol
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/29/2014 1:25:00 PM
Hubby can realx and go to sleep at the drop of a hat wish I could:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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