Sleep Apnea

I could hardly breathe, 
death was in the making.
As the in and out slowed to out,
expelling a long slow breath, 
I was ready for what was to come.
In the far distance something familiar,
more of a feeling than a memory.
Enough awake now, 
I knew it was a bathroom call.
As I stumbled to that little room,
all I could think of was how good 
it was going to be to get back to sleep.
I really don’t recall getting back in bed.
If I could only get back to sleep---------.
People in the room, muffled voices.
“You say you just woke up 
and found him this way,” “Yes” I heard her say.
“Must have been a heart attack”, a strange voice.
But I’m not dead, I’m not dead” I tried to scream.
Yet, I could not move at all.
In the far distance something familiar,
I was holding my breath, which I let out
in a long, long sigh of relief--------------,
as the alarm clock came into full being.

© Jul 18 2010 For Nikko’s “twist and shock” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
January 11, 2013 at 5:12 PM
We make ourselves nervous wrecks Light & Love
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations Charles on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Twist and SHOCK" Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
August 10, 2010 at 9:57 PM
I really liked this one. Congratulations! Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
August 8, 2010 at 8:30 AM
Many congratulations Charles on your win in Nikko's fine contest >> James
Mehta Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:43 PM
Congrats on your well deserved win, Charles
Sweetheart Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 12:14 PM
Congrats Charles on your winning poem in the Twist and Shock contest with another exceptional piece.. enjoy a momentous victory today..with luv..
K. Avatar
August 7, 2010 at 9:55 AM
Thank goodness it was just a dream, Charles!! Wonderfully written with a cool twist & congrats on your win! -- nikko :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 7:12 AM
Hey, you did really great for NIkko's contest with this one. You came up with something quite interesting.. I enjoyed it. LUv, Andrea
Culverhouse Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 4:03 AM
strange and creepy twist of a tale! enjoyed!
Gelb Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 5:17 PM
Good, I can relate I also have sleep apnea and nacolepsy.
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