Barbara Gorelick Poet Rhyme

Sleep - An Andaree

Slip this mortal coil and with the angels ride
All this day’s troubles now put aside
Untold secrets you may keep
Drift with slumber deep
No more tears
Sleep
Forget fears
Now God’s blessing reap
The unknown road may be steep
With sweetest dreams let your heart abide
Slip this mortal coil and with the angels ride

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Skat A October 21, 2015 at 9:28 PM Barbara, Wonderful win.................. SKAT

Joyce Johnson October 17, 2015 at 11:47 PM Very nicely done. congratulations on your high placement. I like it very much. Love, Joyce

Jan Allison October 17, 2015 at 9:12 PM Dropping back with my congrats Barbara - its 3.11 and and I'm STILL awake:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich October 17, 2015 at 8:53 PM a wonderful inspirational message in yours. Congrats, Barbara.

Sandra Haight October 13, 2015 at 2:34 PM Very soothing to read -- almost like a lullaby, Barbara. Enjoyed this very much, and I wish you all the best for the contest. Hugs, Sandra

CayCay Godwin October 7, 2015 at 4:19 AM A very beautiful Andaree - good luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading it ... CayCay

Michael Tor October 7, 2015 at 2:44 AM Barbara this is beautiful and true. Sleep the way is described here is awesome. Everyone should have this every night. Thank you for sharing. A 7 for sure.

Poet Destroyer A October 6, 2015 at 11:33 PM Barbara, I wonder how mine would read if I ever did stunning poem like this. Anyways, I'm off to sleep, this is the perfect poem to end my night with. Who knows where my dreams will take me. LINDA

Laura Leiser October 6, 2015 at 11:14 PM Oops, I meant to say Andaree!

Laura Leiser October 6, 2015 at 11:12 PM Very beautiful etheree, Barbara! Enjoyed this very much. Good luck in the contest:)

Jan Allison October 6, 2015 at 10:07 PM Its 04.05 am I wish I could sleep!!!!! Am going to try again your poem has inspired me to want to dream:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx