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Sleep To wait for a dream wonderous scenes of piquant parfaits with a blended relish of creamy fruit and almonds savoring and ready to eat daunted by an ogre's appearance who gobbles it down and awakens you Contest March 26, 2014

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Date: 4/2/2014 5:48:00 PM
RALPH, Congratulations on your winning poem.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 4/3/2014 8:52:00 AM
Hi Linda: Thank you very much for your comment. It's nice to win once in a while.
Date: 4/2/2014 10:12:00 AM
A very sweet etheree, with the ogre appearing in the end in his dream to gobble up all that creamy fruit. It reads like when you tell a story to a child at bedtime,, and they pretend like they're real scared, giggling all the while... I want to thank you for your supporting my contest,, and Congrats Ralph on a very fine win with this wonderfully written piece! Best wishes...
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Date: 4/2/2014 5:13:00 AM
Hi, Congrats on your win. How apt. Just as the dream takes you on a delicious journey the next course appears which is spoiled and errgh! wakes us up. Well put together. All the best Theresa xx
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Date: 4/2/2014 1:55:00 AM
An apt form you have chosen for the theme of your poem. Congrats on the fine win,ralph
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Date: 4/2/2014 12:10:00 AM
RALPH:) Congratulations, ON YOUR WIN ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/28/2014 9:38:00 AM
This is very nice Ralph. I wish you good luck in the contest... Lucilla
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