Sleek Stream

Sleek stream,
surge cascades
on heart of vale.
Flow of joy rolls me on…
pebble 

May 7, 2019
Name of challenge : Writing Challenge 1, May 2019-Cinqku
Sponsor : Dear Heart
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La France Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Subimal, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful poem!
Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 3:17 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 6:40 PM
what a cute ending. Love how it rolls on over a little pebble!
Andresen Avatar
May 8, 2019 at 3:15 AM
- A great suggestion, Subimal :) - Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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