Slavery

memories remain broken chains in the closet pain inherited Bite Size Poems no33 Poetry Contest

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Line Gauthier

Date: 11/12/2022 1:27:00 PM

A touching poem, Peter ~

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/29/2022 6:11:00 AM

Wow!~a very poignant, moving and beautiful Haiku~congratulations on your placement in the contest. :) Paulette

Ann Peck

Date: 1/27/2022 8:18:00 AM

Your words are very true, Peter, and beautifully written. Congratulations!

Franci Hoffman

Date: 2/19/2021 9:00:00 AM

Powerful, my friend!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 2/17/2021 7:18:00 PM

Very beautiful.

Jo Chamberlain

Date: 2/17/2021 2:54:00 PM

I found your Haiku really powerful.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 2/17/2021 10:22:00 AM

Wow Peter! You have a great gift of writing so much about such painful subjects in such few words! Keep doing it and congrats on your lifetime membership.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2019 12:12:00 PM

This is totally real to many who cringe when they read it I imagine.