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Slave No color No grave No place No past No future bonds rope chains Pain No hope No Tear No one to hold near No redress No race No face Only the end The final disgrace A Slave of Memories stolen .......... the half empty plate Rose petals of hate Silence your fate

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/30/2017 6:25:00 PM
Excellent piece! I love this form and your choice of words splendid
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Date: 12/2/2017 11:11:00 AM
Strong poem, Arthur. You say a lot with few words.
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Date: 11/27/2017 10:26:00 PM
dreary feeling and hate must heal hugs dear friend
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Date: 11/25/2017 11:44:00 PM
I really really like this one. Awesome poem Arthur :) hugs and smiles :)
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Date: 11/25/2017 1:20:00 PM
Arthur, each word of each line carries the weight of great emotional and human significance in your dark and powerful poem. Well done!
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Date: 11/25/2017 10:34:00 AM
wow, very great poem, Arthur. It has impact and is very well expressed
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Date: 11/25/2017 9:06:00 AM
I have lived this. Tyfs
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Date: 11/25/2017 6:38:00 AM
Nice...a vanguard poem...I like it...All the best Arthur
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Date: 11/25/2017 6:17:00 AM
Such dark imagery I got a chill down my spine when i read this one Arthur, I'm not familiar with the choka form. its not one I've attempted:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/25/2017 5:37:00 AM
Art, this one is so well done - each word.
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