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Slave

She wrapped herself in a beautiful lie Bound so tight she was unable to fly Slave to some pictues in a magazine The essence of her could barely be seen Bound so tight she was unable to fly Choices she had made but didn't know why The essence of her could barely be seen The face of a woman who's only a teen Choices she had made but didn't know why Taking her love from a much older guy The face of a woman who's only a teen Absorbing sad from the places she's been Taking her love from a much older guy Minutes became years as her youth went by Absorbing sad from the places she's been Wanted happy but became sad and mean Minutes became years as her youth went by Life of desperation and getting high Wanted happy but became sad and mean Pain began early when she was fourteen Life of desperation and getting high She wrapped herself in a beautiful lie Pain began early when she was fourteen Slave to some pictures in a magazine

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/28/2016 7:53:00 PM

Very powerful poem, Richard. Real, gritty and honest depiction of a sex slave. This pantoum form, I will have to seriously consider giving it a try ... I like how a message/theme can get repeated that you want to impress upon the reader. Great job, maestro. Much love to you. RW

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 8/17/2014 6:45:00 PM

Rick, I visited your page and read Best Richard Lamoureux Poems. I enjoyed what I read immensely. How long have you be writing Poetry? Oh, and "Slave" is unique. Verlena

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2014 6:54:00 PM

I wrote poetry back in grade school, but stopped until I was in my forties. I wrote steady for about a year and a bit and stopped for seven years. Now for the last three years I have been writing regularly. My first book came out this January and I have received tremendous reviews. It started out as 75 pages and grew to 320 as a result of a mentor pushing me to dig deeper. I am glad he did.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/20/2014 8:52:00 PM

Hey you are kinda good at this poetry thing, okay really you are great and everything I read of yours impresses me even more. ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/17/2014 6:55:00 PM

How did I miss this one Casarah? You are good for my ego.

Gina Montalbo

Date: 5/2/2014 6:51:00 PM

Wow so true great write...loved it..... Gina

Gina Montalbo
Date: 5/3/2014 9:31:00 AM

Well my mom has told me to be proud of who and what i am she made me as perfect as i can be so what you see is what you get men who look for perfection miss the little things that make a woman perfect the perfect woman is the one that completes you... Gina

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/2/2014 7:03:00 PM

Thanks Gina, I appreciate you looking at one of my less recent poems. I sometimes thin it must be difficult being a woman with all the unreasonable expectations nowadays. Often what women think men are looking for is far from reality. What do you think???

Donna Jones

Date: 5/1/2014 9:21:00 AM

Richard...going to favs with this one to read over again ..it is a rare gem...too true to be enjoyed lightly..I mean that in a good way...you did a wonderful job...awesome work Richard

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/1/2014 9:42:00 AM

I am honored! Thanks so much Donna you are sweet.

Carol Eastman

Date: 4/8/2014 9:01:00 PM

A very unique poem. Well done! The title caught my attention.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/9/2014 8:32:00 AM

Thanks Carol.

Sarai Virden

Date: 4/7/2014 4:11:00 AM

A sad kind of lovely poem. This one had me entranced. Hope you are well Rick... Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/7/2014 7:51:00 AM

Hi Sarai, I am very well thank you. It is always nice to start the day with a hug, thanks.

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 4/6/2014 7:14:00 PM

Man, You really worked this one Richard. If my hat was on, I would be taking it off to you !

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/6/2014 9:32:00 PM

Thanks Jerry.

James Tate

Date: 4/6/2014 2:50:00 PM

Richard, I like your style, command of poetry. Slave is well written. Thanks for your comment on my comment on Craig's poem in the hourglass shape.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/6/2014 9:33:00 PM

My pleasure James, thanks for dropping by.

Patrick Nigros

Date: 4/6/2014 2:28:00 PM

im loving ths poem, "she wrapped herself in a beautifull lie" , one day when life takes me to Canada, i want to shake your hand and say "your such a blessing here on the soup"

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/6/2014 2:43:00 PM

I would be honored to shake your hand. Where are you from?

Jan Allison

Date: 4/5/2014 12:32:00 PM

Fabulous powerful poem Richard tackling such a difficult subject loved the repetition of the lines. Hugs Jan xxx

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/6/2014 8:45:00 AM

Thanks Jan.

Poet Tacito

Date: 4/5/2014 9:08:00 AM

What you describe is a hugely ongoing problem here in my city. It's such a shame. Tremendous & hard-hitting write.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2014 9:39:00 AM

I'm sorry to hear that, I guess no place is immune.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 4/5/2014 8:21:00 AM

Such sadness in your words. Too often young girls look for outward validation of beauty and worth when it is within them.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2014 8:50:00 AM

It is indeed sad.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 4/5/2014 7:52:00 AM

A poem of incomparable beauty that depicts the truth and conveys a message! How many young are lost in this manner is beyond numbers! The worst thing is for someone to become a slave to his passions! Bravo! A 7 for beauty and substance!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2014 8:51:00 AM

Thankyou I appreciate your kindness.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/4/2014 10:22:00 PM

Hi Richard, havent been around lately, so catching up on some reading, This is another great poem! Hope all is well with you!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/5/2014 8:52:00 AM

Thanks Arthur, all is indeed well with me.

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 4/4/2014 5:58:00 PM

beautiful yet tragic Rick very powerful pen hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2014 7:51:00 PM

I checked earlier to see if you posted a new one. Let me know when you do. Thanks for the visit, hugs Rick

Ken Carroll

Date: 4/4/2014 5:21:00 PM

Awesome write Richard with a moving story line..

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2014 5:22:00 PM

Thanks Ken.

Red Fiery

Date: 4/4/2014 10:56:00 AM

Richard , you have highlighted a difficult subject with brevity. I had to read it over and over again..you are so creative. I missed reading your poems...but they brought me here...hugs Red

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2014 12:41:00 PM

A big hug back to you! I have missed your visits, welcome back. How have you been?

Kelly Deschler

Date: 4/3/2014 5:05:00 PM

I can really relate to this poem. I personally know someone who is headed down this same road, and I hope that she turns around before it's too late...This is a truly amazing write, Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/4/2014 12:43:00 PM

My wife runs an eating disorder program here in Kelowna. Most people don't realize what a serious problem it is.

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/4/2014 11:49:00 AM

I agree, Richard. This person that I mentioned is a close family member. She has been dyeing her hair blonde since she was 15, and she barely eats anything to maintain a perfect body. I want her to see that there is so much more to her than just a pretty face.

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2014 8:25:00 PM

We need to cultivate the inner beauty. It is so hard in a society that is infatuated with appearance.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 4/3/2014 10:53:00 AM

WOW! What an awesome write on such a difficult subject, Richard. You did very well in highlighting the pain and sorrow many women go through to become accepted. Hugs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2014 8:26:00 PM

In many cases men are to blame for how women see themselves.

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 4/3/2014 10:50:00 AM

Grim, but noble write Richard!

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2014 8:27:00 PM

Thanks Keith, it's good to add a male perspective.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/3/2014 10:42:00 AM

gut-wrenching reality of dis[placed women filled with your deep expressions.. awesome!.. huggs

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2014 8:28:00 PM

A big hug back to you Nette.

Aiyah Torres

Date: 4/3/2014 10:12:00 AM

poor young women.. . they are the victims of this rotten society... and their "essence" became food for the mouth of starving evils!!! .. . this is one superb write, Rick!! ... SALUTE!!! :o))

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 4/3/2014 8:29:00 PM

Males are starting to be effected as well. There is much higher anxiety in our young men nowadays.