Patrice Trice Jackson Poet Free verse

Slash

Dreamy state of being
My heart harmonizing,
Harmonizing could of, should of,
and would of....

My mind wonders,
wonders of the why's
The was I good enoughs?
pretty enoughs?
 Hmm...

Fantasizing till dawn
Night fall, realizing 
My heart, my affection,
been slashed

Slash from deceitful
passion,
cloying nothings
misguided 
temporary emotions

my soul left in the cold 
longing for our spirits, 
to union as one
left defeating war with
my head and heart 

Only to realize
my hoping and wishing 
been slashed....

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Richard Evans January 1, 2019 at 2:40 PM "Fantasizing 'til dawn" is so me. Patrice Trice Jackson January 1, 2019 at 5:57 PM Thank you Richard Happy New Year

Phatt Matt December 30, 2017 at 10:25 PM You have a beautiful writing here, I can tell it is from the heart. To me it flows like a jazzy vibe. You feel every vibe. Very sad but fun read~phatt Patrice Trice Jackson January 1, 2019 at 5:58 PM Thank you love

Darren White June 20, 2017 at 6:30 AM This is so beautifully written, yet so sad... But still. You can write! This is my favourite stanza: "My mind wonders, // wonders of the why's // The was I good enoughs? // pretty enoughs? // Hmm..." Patrice Trice Jackson June 20, 2017 at 9:58 AM Thank you Darren I'm so glad you really enjoyed my poem... God bless you