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Another word flashes in my mind Another slash in this heart of mine They say all good things come to an end They don't tell you that you have to lose a friend They don't tell you that a part of your life would end. It hurts so bad There are not enough synonyms to sad The sadness I feel ignites my anger Now I argue out of desperation The constant need of things you deem taboo Like the idea that you have an attitude Or that sometimes you don't have to be rude and you say that no one deserves to know you But do you know you? I feel pain for saying that But who other than me could tell you that? I wrote you a letter in the form of poetry Because the only people who think on this level is you and me

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Date: 2/9/2020 1:20:00 PM
Very sad theme. A blend of love, loss and anger. Nicely presented. Welcome and best wishes for you my dear poet.
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Date: 1/14/2019 12:38:00 PM
Powerful poetry, Issabella. Keep speaking power to truth. I hope this letter reaches your intended soul destination. Splendid poem! May love light your path in life always.
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Issabella McCarty
Date: 1/22/2019 5:34:00 AM
Thank you so much!!
Date: 1/7/2019 9:52:00 PM
Very sad emotions in this poem; I like the letter idea to connect to someone else. Very powerful.
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Issabella McCarty
Date: 1/10/2019 7:38:00 PM
Thank you so much!
Date: 12/29/2018 10:24:00 PM
Keep writing, this is beautiful, even sad...
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Issabella McCarty
Date: 12/29/2018 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 12/29/2018 12:25:00 AM
Dear Issabella, I have said this for years: "There are not enough synonyms to sad". It is so true. Welcome to Poetry Soup.
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