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summer mugginess rain bringing out pesty pest biting sting, quick slap vile blood sucking mosquitoes brush away annoying flies 8/19/2021 A Buggy Tanka Contest Poetry Contest Sponsored by: M. L. Kiser

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Jcb Brul

Date: 9/12/2021 3:48:00 PM

Ouch, I could feel the bites!!! This is what I hate about summer..They proliferate and annoy us…Congratulations Eve! Best wishes..

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/12/2021 12:59:00 PM

Great one Eve! Congratulations :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/12/2021 11:08:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write and picture. Please, no bugs. Have a blessed day...................

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/12/2021 3:33:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, even the photo. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 9/12/2021 12:43:00 AM

Congrats Eve on a biting message! very nice tanka!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/24/2021 11:25:00 AM

I HATE MOSQUITOES BUT THE LOVE ME. THEY ARE SO ANNOYING AND IF YOR HAPPEN TO HAVE ONE IN YOUR BEDROOM AT NIGHT, YOU CAN FORGET A GOOD NIGHTS SLEEP. I GOT MALARIA AS A CHILD IN NOW ZIMBABWE, THEN SOUTHERN RHODESIA, WAS VERY SICK. GREAT WRITE MY POETIC SIS, HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.