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Slamming the Status Quo

oh you want to slam me I don't think so son
ill crash your ship upon the rocks
while laughing just for fun
straight whip out all my cocks
and peck you till your done

id like to take the time to slam the government
but there all just pawns
who don't know where they all went
so I pet them all like newborn fawns
don't you remember its the people who are to be number one

and for the kings and queens
what the hell is wrong with you
want to keep us picking beans
I hope your crown turns black and blue
don't make me do the knocking with the power of the sun

and money
don't get me started dude
I do this stuff for free
any other way is rude
and even if I eat some crumbs I'm above the ruthless scum

how about the church
a layer cake of bull**** thousands of years old
stagnant as a piece of birch
growing with some mold
no wonder they try to rape us cause there really number none

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/11/2014 10:47:00 AM

I enjoyed the Rap feel of this piece. I'm saddened by the perception that young people are feeling towards the church and the belief that it has lost relevance. In the end people are the church and we have the power to be it's significance. We can reform it one voice, one word at a time. In the end God is no less relavant and no less needed. Congratulations on a fine win. The world needs young poets, this is your time.

Roy Jerden

Date: 5/10/2014 11:39:00 AM

Excellent slam, if somewhat of a shotgun blast instead of a focused target. I don't think you left too many out.Congratulations on the fine slam and your placement!