Slam Time

You like a river bank,
one my brain thought about my heart sank.
You are a silver tank,
one I should  lock it and nail on a plank.

my aim is to protect,
the world against you,  n your soul a suspect. 
eventually I dont respect,
whenever your flaws I detect.

You like the motive behind art,
a rhythm that lacks a good  part.
a boring  song,
that plays on for so long.

Your hands are never blazing.
your eyes are scary ,stop gazing.
Your  face with dimples,
would have been better without pimples.

You are the bliss,
I rather  miss.
a grand crime,
that waste the time.

You are the period pain,
reason why all women avoiding  your Lane. 
you are the least sip on the glass.
one we drink for sake of drinking at last.

You the paper that toilets know better.
even greater when it gets wetter.
weaker, as it's easier to get it shattered.
wait let me not waste time or tell you that later, 
in this slam , actually  you do not matter.



03/05/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
January 18, 2025 at 6:16 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
Michael Avatar
May 3, 2018 at 3:38 PM
Nice rhythm and grove...I like the freeness in the write...All the best
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