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Slam Time - So You Think You Can Rhyme

you think you can rhyme your words out of time like a dancer offbeat you step and repeat you sound like a fool your mouth open to drool trying to take me down like bozo the clown no words to be heard and nothing to say so you flip them the bird then you walk away like a sucker in a suit you're better off mute Contest: So You Think You Can Rhyme

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Date: 5/11/2018 4:02:00 PM
A powerful little poem, I'm delighted for you Carmen:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/8/2018 7:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this awesome slam! Enjoyed.
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Date: 5/8/2018 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Carmen beautifully written. :))
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Date: 5/7/2018 9:03:00 PM
Congrats on your silver medal win, Carmen, Sunshine. Well done.
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Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 5/8/2018 4:23:00 AM
thanks!
Date: 5/7/2018 8:30:00 PM
Ha! So good! That ending, so awesome! Congratulations on your win!
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Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 5/8/2018 4:24:00 AM
thanks!
Date: 5/7/2018 7:25:00 PM
Carmen thank you for entering the contest and following all given rules. Congrats on your placement! Please allow 24hrs for your PM to show.
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Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 5/8/2018 4:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, I am literally surprised !

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