Skyscrapers

Did you see her? I guess you didn't.  

Since then, she never went out again. She hid all herself for years inside those tall apartments and buildings. She walked through strap-like hallways and crawled under low surfaced ceilings. She used to be inside since then.  She concealed her melancholiness and never gave the world a chance to see her once more. She was an outside person actually, but not anymore. 

I just lately learned all of these about her. I searched for all the streets in London and Paris, but never found a hint of her. Not knowing she's immured behind those thick walls of concrete edifices.    

Now, I cautiously observe every single window of an apartment, building, and skyscraper. I keep an eye on every single windowpane, hoping one day you'll cabbage the curtains and take a glance. Lucky enough if you'll open the glass that separates you from me. Luckier if you'll dare to open a door, and let the world to see your face we missed the most.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/15/2016 8:46:00 PM
Hansi this is very intriguing write....The suspense you created is amazing
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Date: 4/5/2016 2:05:00 AM
Hans, this is outstanding, you made me want to see her too, I am loving this 7 ~
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Date: 4/2/2016 2:09:00 AM
Interesting prose, Hansteven. I liked the imagery of her being locked away in a skyscraper ... very forlorn. I hope one day she'll come out of her cage and be greeted by a face that looks as joyful as the one in your avatar. Well penned (especially the last stanza) ...
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Date: 4/1/2016 7:01:00 PM
a clever way to describe a woman who refuses to show herself or her soul. I sense it's metaphorical. I hope she comes out from hiding!
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