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AS long as I see the sky contest Sponsored by Jcb Brul 11/06/24

as long as I see the sky and rainbow arcs, I’m very much alive

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/30/2024 9:38:00 AM

Love it , Jan. Big congrats

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/29/2024 6:38:00 AM

beautiful thought dear poet. congratulations. cheers.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/29/2024 6:31:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, Jan :) - hugs

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/22/2024 6:14:00 PM

Lovely photo and monoku. Thanks for sharing.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/14/2024 9:07:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful Monoku write. What a great sky/rainbow picture. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/12/2024 11:33:00 AM

Yes, alive in many dimensions and realms, Jan. I like this simple, yet eloquent, expression of life. Hugs and blessings of joy!

Richard Colbert

Date: 11/12/2024 9:21:00 AM

So few words that say so much. Nice Jan. Rich

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/9/2024 6:11:00 PM

Breathtaking scene. I like this poetic painting.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/9/2024 8:53:00 AM

Nice one, Jan:)

Joseph May

Date: 11/9/2024 7:17:00 AM

Lovely Monoku Jan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/8/2024 9:04:00 AM

Well written. Loved the mention of the rainbow.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 11/8/2024 5:14:00 AM

Jan, at least the fascist hasn't figured out how to obliterate those. At least not yet...although he is planning to.

Michael Tor

Date: 11/7/2024 9:58:00 PM

Love this one Jan. Uplifting and vibrant. Great Monoku and One of the best I have read so far...Hugs...

Terry Flood

Date: 11/7/2024 4:38:00 PM

A smashing monoku, Jan. You just gotta love a good rainbow.

James Peranteau

Date: 11/7/2024 11:55:00 AM

...likewise i dear poet...and, i be love'n Monokus...ty...much love ')

Ilene Bauer

Date: 11/7/2024 8:42:00 AM

This is great, Jan! I always feel lucky when I see a rainbow and your words capture that very well…

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/7/2024 8:30:00 AM

I love your rainbow in the sky pic. and your Monoku, of how alive this makes you feel. Very well penned and good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/7/2024 7:17:00 AM

- A beautiful picture and feel, Jan :) - GL in the contest :) - hugs