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AS long as I see the sky contest Sponsored by Jcb Brul 11/06/24

Sky watcher


as long as I see the sky and rainbow arcs,  I’m very much alive

rainbowskymonoku

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Andrea Dietrich

November 30, 2024 at 9:38 AM

Love it , Jan. Big congrats

thriveni c mysore

November 29, 2024 at 6:38 AM

beautiful thought dear poet. congratulations. cheers.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 29, 2024 at 6:31 AM

- Congratulations on your winning line, Jan :) - hugs

Eileen Manassian

November 22, 2024 at 6:14 PM

Lovely photo and monoku. Thanks for sharing.

Paula Goldsmith

November 14, 2024 at 9:07 AM

I enjoyed reading this wonderful Monoku write. What a great sky/rainbow picture. Have a blessed day writing away.............

Sam Kauffman

November 12, 2024 at 11:33 AM

Yes, alive in many dimensions and realms, Jan. I like this simple, yet eloquent, expression of life. Hugs and blessings of joy!

Richard Colbert

November 12, 2024 at 9:21 AM

So few words that say so much. Nice Jan. Rich

Hilda Greenhough

November 9, 2024 at 6:11 PM

Breathtaking scene. I like this poetic painting.

Joanna Daniel

November 9, 2024 at 8:53 AM

Nice one, Jan:)

Joseph May

November 9, 2024 at 7:17 AM

Lovely Monoku Jan

Victor Buhagiar

November 8, 2024 at 9:04 AM

Well written. Loved the mention of the rainbow.

Duke Beaufort

November 8, 2024 at 5:14 AM

Jan, at least the fascist hasn't figured out how to obliterate those. At least not yet...although he is planning to.

Michael Tor

November 7, 2024 at 9:58 PM

Love this one Jan. Uplifting and vibrant. Great Monoku and One of the best I have read so far...Hugs...

Terry Flood

November 7, 2024 at 4:38 PM

A smashing monoku, Jan. You just gotta love a good rainbow.

James Peranteau

November 7, 2024 at 11:55 AM

...likewise i dear poet...and, i be love'n Monokus...ty...much love ')

Ilene Bauer

November 7, 2024 at 8:42 AM

This is great, Jan! I always feel lucky when I see a rainbow and your words capture that very well…

Jennifer Proxenos

November 7, 2024 at 8:30 AM

I love your rainbow in the sky pic. and your Monoku, of how alive this makes you feel. Very well penned and good luck in the contest my friend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.