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Ink Empress' Roses or Fireflies Contest...28 Feb 25
Amidst a burning skyline where every tick of a gesture a happenstance charges my essence and absorbs this space where discoveries allow me a chance to revel at what is miraculous...the dance of kaleidoscopic stars, toddlers wiggling like cherubs , fireflies dressed like the Orion... and I go with the flow, radiant as wings of revelry guide me through an armada of delirious fireflies I need not comprehend... because my heart awaits the next swing of child-like enthrallment delirious as the zigzaging zings in a twirl, in ribbons laced by thrills of free imagination...there, in that jeweled wing, I seek nothing but the translucent lucent spins in total wanderlust of the unknown, ready to celebrate this flight of eternal fireflies away from the ordinary glitter within what could ever be any woodland that's ever near !

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Date: 2/24/2025 5:45:00 PM
Nette, this is such a lovely and empathetic description life and fireflies in all different kinds of terms. Really lovely for sure. Smiles!!!
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Date: 2/24/2025 6:38:00 AM
Another stunning write my dearest Nette. Glad to be back here after a phonecall. Congrats on your win sis! Thanks for sharing. Hugs
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Date: 2/23/2025 5:29:00 PM
CONGRATS on your win with this vividly descriptive, delightful piece, Nette! Janice
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Date: 2/21/2025 11:57:00 AM
Back again with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write again. Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away..................
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Date: 2/21/2025 4:05:00 AM
Dear nette, as always youv delivered a poem that is unique and different and so fitting for the prompt too. I love “like the Orion... and I go with the flow, radiant as wings of revelry guide me through an armada” great wordplay! Thank you for supporting my contest. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/18/2025 8:57:00 PM
Gorgeous. It creates so many images, magic. :)
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Date: 2/18/2025 1:38:00 PM
Funny how the strong feelings of childhood flood the soul when fireflies appear
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Date: 2/18/2025 8:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. "Good Luck" Have a very blessed day writing away.................
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Date: 2/18/2025 6:59:00 AM
Nothing like child-like wonder is there Nette? If only we could sustain it throughout our lives. Alas, the world beats us up, makes us jaded, skeptical, even pessimistic. We lose it along the way. Awesome take, though I think the contest ended
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