Sky of Fireflies

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Roses or fireflies contest by Ink Empress

Twilight Tranquil country summer. Smell the sun baked soil and thirsty blades of grass eager for the dew. Easy. Simple. Unhurried. Slowly swaying to nature's musical Crickets fiddle, marsh Frogs hum bass drum and Cello trill vibrations Under bare, dirty feet. Cattail castanets tapping to the beat. A thrill for all the senses as the light show begins… Each flash keeps tempo, twinkling in delightful dance! Unveiling moments of simple summertime magic. These nights, every blessed childhood lullaby, sweetly remembered.

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Tom Woody

Date: 2/22/2025 5:51:00 AM

Nice placement Cryssy

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/21/2025 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write you have here. Love your sweet ending... Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away..................

Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/21/2025 5:44:00 AM

Beautifully done, Cystol:-) Heartiest congratulations on your win!

Crystol Woods
Date: 2/21/2025 6:43:00 AM

Thank you! Xo

Ink Empress

Date: 2/21/2025 3:37:00 AM

This is so very magical and beautiful how youv painted imagery and delivered something dreamy inspired by the prompt. I love also the flow of your alliterations and how you’ve also especially written “A thrill for all the senses as the light show begins… Each flash keeps tempo, twinkling in delightful dance!” mellifluous write, with such creative wordplay! Thank you for sharing your take on the prompt. Congratulations on your win

Crystol Woods
Date: 2/21/2025 6:43:00 AM

Thank you so much for the recognition and thoughtful comments! This was a really good contest and prompt for writing... everyone did such a beautiful poem. Xoxo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2025 11:59:00 AM

So cool how you included all the night creatures here. Great job!

Crystol Woods
Date: 2/17/2025 1:33:00 AM

Tysm! I am happy with the outcome! I'll stop in and see if you've entered this one too! I need my Andrea poetry fix! ;) xo

Tom Woody

Date: 2/7/2025 1:50:00 PM

Magical evening. A serenade as well as a light show. My idea of Peace, though I'd want my girl next to me to share it with. Awesome poem Crys

Crystol Woods
Date: 2/7/2025 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Tom! I pray every child will hold a memory this sweet. Xo