Notes About The Poem

Sky High New Year

Ringlets reverberate outwards, sky high.

Kaboom! Kaboom! The blazing reds and greens

quickly say hello...then fizzle goodbye.

Violet-tangerine — a sulfur scene.

 

Kaboom! Kaboom! The blazing reds and greens

spinning out like haloes and peacock plumes.

Violet-tangerine, a sulfur scene —

festive crowds cheer for the colorful blooms.

 

Spinning out like haloes and peacock plumes,

quickly say hello...then fizzle goodbye.

Festive crowds cheer for the colorful blooms.

Ringlets reverberate outwards, sky high.

12/29/2020
FIREWORKS POETRY CONTEST
Sponsor: Eve Roper
Poetry Form: Pantoum
Used HMS and Rhymezone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Roper Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 11:48 PM
Thank you for participating and winning in Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Kim, everything I was looking for. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
February 6, 2021 at 3:50 AM
Thank you so much, Eve!
May Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 5:24 PM
Beautifully done Kim, Congrats on your win..
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:41 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Goldsmith Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 11:32 AM
Congratulations on your win. A colorful write and picture. They "fizzle goodbye" way tooooo soon. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Thank you, Paula! <3
Bauer Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 12:22 PM
you've captured the beauty and magic of fireworks with your words, kim! nicely done! have a happy new year...
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 4:21 PM
Happy New yYear, Ilene! Thank you!
Pandit Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:40 AM
A joyful treat for the senses. Well done, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 11:23 PM
This is superb. I will post mine but it is a poor sample compared to yours. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 6:28 AM
I enjoyed yours as well! Thank you, Victor!
Wolf Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 5:47 PM
I feel that this is extremely well-portrayed. Superb contest entry, Kim. Here's to a winner! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 29, 2020 at 8:23 PM
Thank you, my friend!
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