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Ringlets reverberate outwards, sky high. Kaboom! Kaboom! The blazing reds and greens quickly say hello...then fizzle goodbye. Violet-tangerine — a sulfur scene. Kaboom! Kaboom! The blazing reds and greens spinning out like haloes and peacock plumes. Violet-tangerine, a sulfur scene — festive crowds cheer for the colorful blooms. Spinning out like haloes and peacock plumes, quickly say hello...then fizzle goodbye. Festive crowds cheer for the colorful blooms. Ringlets reverberate outwards, sky high. 12/29/2020 FIREWORKS POETRY CONTEST Sponsor: Eve Roper Poetry Form: Pantoum Used HMS and Rhymezone

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Date: 2/5/2021 11:48:00 PM
Thank you for participating and winning in Pantoum contest with this wonderful poem. Your poem had great imagery, feeling, and flow, Kim, everything I was looking for. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/6/2021 3:50:00 AM
Thank you so much, Eve!
Date: 2/4/2021 5:24:00 PM
Beautifully done Kim, Congrats on your win..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 7:41:00 PM
Thank you, Joseph!
Date: 2/4/2021 11:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A colorful write and picture. They "fizzle goodbye" way tooooo soon. Enjoy your win/day with blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/4/2021 1:41:00 PM
Thank you, Paula! <3
Date: 12/30/2020 12:22:00 PM
you've captured the beauty and magic of fireworks with your words, kim! nicely done! have a happy new year...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/30/2020 4:21:00 PM
Happy New yYear, Ilene! Thank you!
Date: 12/30/2020 6:40:00 AM
A joyful treat for the senses. Well done, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/30/2020 8:45:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 12/29/2020 11:23:00 PM
This is superb. I will post mine but it is a poor sample compared to yours. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/30/2020 6:28:00 AM
I enjoyed yours as well! Thank you, Victor!
Date: 12/29/2020 5:47:00 PM
I feel that this is extremely well-portrayed. Superb contest entry, Kim. Here's to a winner! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/29/2020 8:23:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!

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