Skis

Just how drunk were Sven and Olaf when the tied the slats of the empty cask on their feet and headed down the mountain?

John G. Lawless
©1/16/2023
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Callus Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 11:39 AM
A one-liner which leaves us in no doubt that Sven and Olaf had drunk the contents of that cask right to the last drop!! A breathalyser test is recommended :) ~ Regards // paul
Wolf Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Almost unbelievably drunk, methinks.
DiMino Avatar
January 16, 2023 at 7:31 PM
An empty cask? Very drunk!
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