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Skipping

Skipping.......


  Moments of joy.
  Best done by little feet.
  Tired hearts remember.

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Diane Christian

May 24, 2014 at 3:48 AM

well done on your featured poem. love to read more of your work

Deborah Shiells

May 23, 2014 at 8:31 AM

Hi Barbara, This was incredibly sweet~ Thanks so much for sharing this with us, and congrats on this being featured. Love and Peace, Deborah

Skat A

May 22, 2014 at 11:58 AM

BARBARA, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~

Daver Austin

May 20, 2014 at 10:37 AM

Bet you were a good momma. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

Judy Konos

May 19, 2014 at 10:56 AM

This is the best poem I have ever read! Thank you

Mark J. Halliday

May 18, 2014 at 11:57 PM

Wow. So much said in so few words. Loved it.

Nigel Fawcett

October 30, 2008 at 3:11 AM

Positively awesome how much these three short lines convey. So many wonderful memories that make my heart feel lighter. Love, Nigel

Michael Degenhardt

October 28, 2008 at 6:58 AM

This reminds me of a Stevenson Poem entitled "for Mother". The memories and joy relived, hearing the little feet, the skipping, such pleasure. Perfect write. Michael

Michael Jordan

October 27, 2008 at 10:55 PM

Those are some very true words - The other day I picked my daughter up from school and she was playing hop scotch - I injured myself at work a couple of years ago and I've lost 40% of the usage in my my right leg due to nerve damage in my back - Well I went to hop scotch with her and when it came time to hop on my right leg it collapsed on me and I fell in-front of her and all her 6 year old friends - Boy my heart felt real tired at that moment - Embarrassed my little girl - Broke my heart