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A ghostly fog dissipates with dawn's first light, yet a glaze of morning dew lingers. And a splendiferous sun slowly rises, on this magnificent misty Autumn day. By chance or happy happenstance, I perceive an undertone of whispers. Silks and satins rustle in the breeze with their telltale flutters. Perchance, an angel strayed from heaven. My eyes are transfixed. Her smile orchestrates our rendezvous into a symphony of love. Her lips unlock mine with keys of desire oblivious to sin or folly. Curious tongues indulge in ecstasy, acquiescing to passion's will. Aroused, we succumb to naked flesh, skinny-dipping in the pools of our eyes. And synchronize our heartbeats with the opus of our souls.

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Date: 2/23/2019 10:59:00 PM
Wow, Emile, took it right to the hot point on this romance, good work, enjoyed the read.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/24/2019 7:12:00 AM
Thanks Sheri, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/21/2019 5:28:00 PM
So good Emile, you really got the Bardenesque part done real good, congrats on another fine win!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/21/2019 5:56:00 PM
Thanks you so much John, I appreciate it my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/21/2019 3:08:00 PM
Well written and impressive! (And unlike my own, neither dark nor ironic.)
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Date: 2/21/2019 5:55:00 PM
Thanks JP, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/10/2019 11:31:00 AM
Congrats and nicely done, Emile-- and this is why I miss my youth!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2019 11:42:00 AM
Thanks L.J., I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/9/2019 8:50:00 PM
Well penned, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/10/2019 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Line, as always your support is most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/2/2019 2:04:00 PM
Wow, quite passionate, Emile! I especially enjoyed the last verse -- seemed intense and sincere. Best wishes in the contest. It appears the men are enjoying writing for this one.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/2/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thanks so much Carolyn, I can be passionate at times if the mood is just right...thanks again my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/2/2019 2:04:00 PM
WOW! this is really good, well done!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/2/2019 2:48:00 PM
Thanks Bobby, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

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