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Skinny D R I P P I N G Kisses

Skinny dipping night
Rain moves from light to heavy
Pounding of passion 

Lips drink in kisses
Love makers’ dance brings showers
Wetness all around

For PD’s Contest
Kissing in the Rain
Image #6

passionrainhaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2013 2:29:00 PM

Very sensual winning work.Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Sara

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 5/30/2013 6:43:00 AM

I like this one the most, Eileen, congrats!!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/29/2013 4:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/29/2013 1:17:00 AM

Yours were good!! Congrats for HM.

Donna Jones

Date: 5/28/2013 1:33:00 PM

Love these skinny dipping kisses...congratulations you...

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/28/2013 10:41:00 AM

Congratulation my friend on your win. Loved always, bl

Eileen Manassian
Date: 6/1/2013 2:32:00 PM

Thanks, BL. Glad you stopped by.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/28/2013 2:09:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/30/2013 7:38:00 AM

Thanks, sweet dear Anne Lise! So good to hear from you! Hugs!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2013 7:18:00 PM

Eileen. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 7:38:00 PM

I enjoyed writing this. The pictures helped to bring the words. Thanks for taking the time to post this comment.

Poet Tacito

Date: 5/27/2013 9:15:00 AM

Embrace the moisture. ;) This was damn good!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 11:55:00 AM

You are so expressive, Drake! :) Wow! Lovely post!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/26/2013 3:25:00 PM

I love the feeling transmitted in your haiku..evoking emotions and tickling the senses..bravo

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 11:57:00 AM

Charmaine! Thanks ever so much for your kind words. :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2013 12:00:00 AM

wow, super sexy. I went and chose the picture that was only words. I could not figure out how to incorporate kiss into my haiku. Probably I should have chosen a picture!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 11:58:00 AM

Oh wow....I'm heading on over to read what you've written, Andrea...so curious to know what you've said! Hugs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/25/2013 4:59:00 PM

oozing with love's potion... wonderfully expressed..:) huggs

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 11:59:00 AM

Thanks, Nette! What a lovely compliment! I'm touched!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/25/2013 8:48:00 AM

I chose 6 as one of mine as well. Great minds think alike *lol* great Haikus I like the second the best, good double meaning.

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 12:00:00 PM

Thanks, Richard...double meanings are always the best! ;) You have that in your haiku! Great job!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/25/2013 6:31:00 AM

This is such an outstanding and amazing write my friend! You have written a poem that PD will really enjoy...and of which she will place high on the winners list! What a stupendous piece Eileen, Great Work!!

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 12:02:00 PM

I surely do hope that PD smiles on this piece! ): I haven't joined a contest of hers and this is my first....here's hoping! Thanks for the encouragement, Russell! :)

Richard D Seal

Date: 5/25/2013 6:05:00 AM

This is enough to leave anyone dripping :} lol. Hot passion is deffo your thing my little Desert Orchid. Take care, Richard

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/27/2013 12:01:00 PM

Is there any other kind of passion than HOT? My dear Richard...let teacher give you a few lessons on adjective use! ;)

Eileen Manassian
Date: 5/25/2013 6:09:00 AM

Thank you my dear horticulturalist. You do realize that I was following specific instructions for this piece of work...had a picture for inspiration so i cannot take all the credit! However, I do appreciate your comments! :)