Eileen Manassian Poet Haiku

Skinny D R I P P I N G Kisses

Skinny dipping night
Rain moves from light to heavy
Pounding of passion 

Lips drink in kisses
Love makers’ dance brings showers
Wetness all around

For PD’s Contest
Kissing in the Rain
Image #6

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Sara Kendrick June 1, 2013 at 2:29 PM Very sensual winning work.Enjoyed reading it this afternoon..Sara

S.Jagathsimhan Nair May 30, 2013 at 6:43 AM I like this one the most, Eileen, congrats!!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 29, 2013 at 4:58 PM Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich May 29, 2013 at 1:17 AM Yours were good!! Congrats for HM.

Donna Jones May 28, 2013 at 1:33 PM Love these skinny dipping kisses...congratulations you...

Bl Devnath May 28, 2013 at 10:41 AM Congratulation my friend on your win. Loved always, bl Eileen Manassian June 1, 2013 at 2:32 PM Thanks, BL. Glad you stopped by.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 28, 2013 at 2:09 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem in the contest :"Kissing in the rain" - Have a nice day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Eileen Manassian May 30, 2013 at 7:38 AM Thanks, sweet dear Anne Lise! So good to hear from you! Hugs!

Poet Destroyer A May 27, 2013 at 7:18 PM Eileen. Thank you for the lovely pouring sound of your haiku, congratulations with your awesome kissing in the rain entry. * Love LINDA Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 7:38 PM I enjoyed writing this. The pictures helped to bring the words. Thanks for taking the time to post this comment.

Poet Tacito May 27, 2013 at 9:15 AM Embrace the moisture. ;) This was damn good! Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 11:55 AM You are so expressive, Drake! :) Wow! Lovely post!

Charmaine Chircop May 26, 2013 at 3:25 PM I love the feeling transmitted in your haiku..evoking emotions and tickling the senses..bravo Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 11:57 AM Charmaine! Thanks ever so much for your kind words. :)

Andrea Dietrich May 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM wow, super sexy. I went and chose the picture that was only words. I could not figure out how to incorporate kiss into my haiku. Probably I should have chosen a picture!! Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 11:58 AM Oh wow....I'm heading on over to read what you've written, Andrea...so curious to know what you've said! Hugs!

Nette Onclaud May 25, 2013 at 4:59 PM oozing with love's potion... wonderfully expressed..:) huggs Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 11:59 AM Thanks, Nette! What a lovely compliment! I'm touched!

Richard Lamoureux May 25, 2013 at 8:48 AM I chose 6 as one of mine as well. Great minds think alike *lol* great Haikus I like the second the best, good double meaning. Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 12:00 PM Thanks, Richard...double meanings are always the best! ;) You have that in your haiku! Great job!

Russell Sivey May 25, 2013 at 6:31 AM This is such an outstanding and amazing write my friend! You have written a poem that PD will really enjoy...and of which she will place high on the winners list! What a stupendous piece Eileen, Great Work!! Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 12:02 PM I surely do hope that PD smiles on this piece! ): I haven't joined a contest of hers and this is my first....here's hoping! Thanks for the encouragement, Russell! :)

Richard D Seal May 25, 2013 at 6:05 AM This is enough to leave anyone dripping :} lol. Hot passion is deffo your thing my little Desert Orchid. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian May 27, 2013 at 12:01 PM Is there any other kind of passion than HOT? My dear Richard...let teacher give you a few lessons on adjective use! ;) Eileen Manassian May 25, 2013 at 6:09 AM Thank you my dear horticulturalist. You do realize that I was following specific instructions for this piece of work...had a picture for inspiration so i cannot take all the credit! However, I do appreciate your comments! :)

Kim Morrison May 25, 2013 at 5:14 AM I swim in the clarity of your less than two dozen words here and feel your passion. Kim! Eileen Manassian May 25, 2013 at 5:20 AM Well then the poem has accomplished its purpose! :) Thank you for taking a dip!

Ilene Bauer May 25, 2013 at 3:49 AM you are the best at portraying passion! Eileen Manassian May 25, 2013 at 5:19 AM Thanks, Ilene. It is what makes my world spin! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis May 25, 2013 at 3:25 AM Erotic and euphoric! Marvelous! Eileen Manassian May 25, 2013 at 3:28 AM Thanks my dear poet! :)