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Skin Deep

I do not like the skin I’m in - It’s dotted, dry and wrinkled, Like paper with a reject poem - Once smooth, now sadly crinkled. Each little tap becomes a bruise, A purple blotch, attesting To all the years I’ve spent on earth, A dermal-type divesting. Some freckles, not here yesterday, Have multiplied and scattered. They would have bothered me much more When my appearance mattered. What troubles me some others might Find trite and almost risible. I should let go, for at my age, To others I’m invisible.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022




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Date: 6/18/2022 7:40:00 PM
That last line is SPOT on Ilene. pun intended.
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Date: 6/7/2022 10:08:00 AM
At least you are visible in your poems
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Date: 6/5/2022 10:23:00 AM
My mother bemoaned her "crow's feet" eyes which, to me, were "laugh lines", so keep it mind that attitude makes all the difference! But those bruises seem to appear without consciously being bruised! Enjoyed, Ilene! Quite on the mark! Aloha!
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Date: 6/4/2022 7:04:00 PM
Wisdom trumps the inevitability of growing older for me. My adult children defer to my judgment even when they disagree, later they follow my advice. That wasn’t true when they were growing up and needed to experience and learn the hard way. I must say I welcomed my natural hair last year which is now white. It was a chore to keep coloring it. I notice I get offered a lot more help to the car with my groceries now. Lol It isn’t all bad! I could relate to your poem body wise. I can’t run anymore.
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Date: 6/4/2022 6:51:00 PM
Hmmm...I think not. And yet, I often hide my hands when talking with someone, particularly someone new, so they do not see the age spots. For people do seem to blot out those of us who are "elderly." Their shame, I think. But you are right, appearance does not matter as much anymore, but I'm still using my moisturizer!
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Date: 6/4/2022 3:52:00 PM
It's kinda sadly true what you say at the end. We just don't get paid much attention past a certain age! Retinol prescription strength is a good way to curtail the wrinkles. But not much to do for sagging skin except surgery, and I sure can't afford THAT.
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Date: 6/4/2022 2:32:00 PM
Yes, age constantly baffles us. but although many seem invisible, unnecessary, irrelevant, some keep within themselves a splendid treasure that consists of this kind of inner illumination that makes all darkness light. It's your case.
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