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June-24-2024
Double Double Words to Bubble Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Joseph May


 

Skiing Thrill- Double Double Words to Bubble

S  kiing on this snowy peak over the icy stretches is a real tes T,
K  eeping legs on the skis securely firm and standing hig H.
I  tching to experience the adventure of my endeavou R,
I  go down hills in rising vigor, never losing grip, shouting ‘h I’
N  ot shaken by the steep landing with wind giving me a chilling fee L,
G  aily I speed down the icy slopes in triumphant thril L.
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May Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:23 AM
Congrats on your win Valsa, Very nicely done
George Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 5:29 AM
Hi Joseph....Thank you so much for placing my poem in the top list. Feel so delighted.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 12:57 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun Double Acrostic write. If I tried it, I would kill myself. Hahaha!!! Have a great day/weekend..............
George Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 9:00 PM
Love structure Dear Valsa. Profound as always. Memories are made to be remembered. Your fun time and happiness flowed through your piece. Adventures are lovely but I never have the chest for them. Best wishes for the contest.
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 1:23 PM
Awesome work. I had fun doing mine and I can't wait to see all the winners when they appear. I did not post mine yet. I don't even have time to type up the three poems I wrote by hand the other day. I can't even keep up with comments here. haha
Empress Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 11:03 AM
Dear sweet valsa! Youv nailed this form! Iv actually been skiing once in swiss alps, mont blanc and was not a good experience for me as i cant skii hah! So that first line really did bring back those memories! And i love how this one flows too. “ N ot shaken by the steep landing with wind giving me a chilling fee L,” i felt the adrenaline rush of a person doing just that as i read that line! How creative is this. You always writ on various themes just so very well! A fave this is for me! BoL
Greenhough Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 9:25 AM
Nicely penned acrostic. Skiing is a funny word that your poem brought to thrills.
Daniel Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 5:20 AM
Wonderful composition, Valsa:)
One Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 1:34 PM
This seems a bit short for your normal type of poem.. It is an imaginative acrostic which creates real imagery.. Best of luck in the contest..
Kauffman Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Dearest Valsa, this is indeed a well crafted double acrostic! Wonderful images! Nicely done! And, as a former ski instructor, I can feel the wind, the exhilaration and the triumph of each successful run! Time to start getting ready for next season! Blessings dear friend! Thanks for the trip down the slopes.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 11:33 AM
Do you really ski? Quite the enjoyable sporty a rostic!
George Avatar
June 25, 2024 at 1:23 AM
I have just watched others skiing and that too only once. Kim, here we don't have snow.
Narain Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 11:13 AM
Great Acrostic. Enjoy skiing in non snowy native land.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 9:43 AM
What a creative/great Acrostic write. I have never been skiing. Guess I would kill myself. Hahaha!!! "Good Luck" Have a great/blessed day................
DiMino Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 9:15 AM
I have never been skiing, though I do have relatives that ski often, and love it. Well said. Thrilling write. The slippery slope of poetry.
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 7:27 AM
Wonderful work. Way to go. Reads like a good contender to me. When I was young, I might have enjoyed skiing but not anymore. LOL..Too breakable. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 5:42 AM
This is a wonderful acrostic, with each line using the letters at the beginning and end of each line. Very well done. Blessings.
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