Skiing

Snow coming down was found Kissing the ground Ice covered trees like diamonds wore a crown It was a snowy week for all around Not even the birds made a sound Going to get warm we are home bound Date Written: 1/18/2023 RHYMING ACROSTIC

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/20/2023 9:33:00 AM

Lovely.You brought back my days, learning to ski in Wisconsin. Unique acrostic, Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/20/2023 1:48:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. Glad you like my "Skiing" acrostic write. I have never tried skiing~snow or water. I am not going to start. I would probably kill myself. Hahaha. Have a blessed day/weekend............

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/19/2023 10:51:00 PM

Hi Paula, what a cute poem, I love its message, its creativity and its perfect Acrostic image. I often wonder how birds fly such enormous distances from continent to continent, another beautiful mystery from our Omnipresent God , guess its a miracle. Hugs, blessings, Jennifer

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/20/2023 7:21:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. I am glad you love this write. There are many miracle in life. Hugs. Have a blessed day............

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/18/2023 10:26:00 PM

A nice snowy scene you paint, Paula:)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2023 12:44:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing. I am glad you like the white snow write I painted. Have a blessed day............

Lady Labyrinth

Date: 1/18/2023 6:00:00 PM

Stunningly succinct and dripping with beauty.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2023 12:42:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your kind words. I love to look at the beautiful white snow. I don't miss shoveling snow. It was pretty to be out in but a lot of work/mess. Have a blessed day............

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/18/2023 12:14:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, Paula. Snow, whether viewed via a window or captured in a photograph, is a sight to behold. Best of luck to you in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/19/2023 12:37:00 PM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your best of luck. Oh yes, a window or picture is a great way to view the beautiful white snow. Have a blessed day............

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/18/2023 10:36:00 AM

Have only water skied, would love to try it on the snowy slopes. Tom

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/18/2023 11:03:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing. Never tried skiing~snow or water. I am not going to start. I would probably kill myself. Have a blessed day............

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/18/2023 10:28:00 AM

- Snow is beautiful to look at ... through the window or in a photo (... I'd rather be without ... :))) ... lovely poem, Paula - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/18/2023 11:01:00 AM

Thank You for reading/writing and for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my skiing write. You are so right, give me the window or picture to look at. I remember freezing at the bus stop to go to work. All that snow shoveling. Makes me cold to think about it. Now I need hot coffee or hot tea. Have a blessed day............