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Skies and Seas

Written in the sky Twinkling star lights Shining everyone, so bright Points in the sky Directing stout ships All night and alright The moon and its light steers The mighty seas To lands known and unknown The waves are breaking Upon many shores It carrying shrimps, and clams Turquoise blue sea waves Their white foam heads are moving smiling back at me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/15/2018 7:23:00 PM
I really like the ending of this one, how the waves of the seas are smiling back at you!!
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/26/2018 9:45:00 PM
Updated the Poem, one last time. Amen
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/21/2018 10:47:00 PM
Just improved the poem at this time as inspired. Amen Blessings
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/19/2018 9:35:00 PM
Just did one last fine tune.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/18/2018 4:57:00 PM
Just touched up the poem for a more classical perfect write I believe. Amen Blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/16/2018 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, I too smile back at your commentary. Blessings, in Jesus name. Amen
Date: 6/15/2018 11:50:00 AM
Lovely scenery in your poem, Ronald.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/26/2018 9:45:00 PM
Updated the Poem, one last time. Amen
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/21/2018 10:46:00 PM
Just improved the poem at this time as inspired. Amen Blessings
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/19/2018 9:35:00 PM
Just did one last fine tune.
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/18/2018 4:57:00 PM
Just touched up the poem for a more classical perfect write I believe. Amen Blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/15/2018 12:28:00 PM
Amen, much thanks Vijay. I am glad that you enjoyed it Blessings.
Date: 6/15/2018 9:31:00 AM
A beautiful poem Ronald and I love the ending too :)
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/26/2018 9:45:00 PM
Updated the Poem, one last time. Amen
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/21/2018 10:46:00 PM
Just improved the poem at this time as inspired. Amen Blessings
Williams Avatar
Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/19/2018 9:35:00 PM
Just did one last fine tune.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/18/2018 4:56:00 PM
Just touched up the poem for a more classical perfect write I believe. Amen Blessings.
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Ronald A. Williams
Date: 6/15/2018 11:11:00 AM
Hi Heidi, Thanks for the pleasant feed back and line comment. Blessings.

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