Winged Warrior Poet Tanka

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Skewing Realities

Raped realities
raw reverberating realms
dimensions divide
expanding echoes entwined
limitless levitating.



5 lines only with syllable count 5/7/5/7/7


...this Tanka can also be read backward...from bottom-right to top-left or top right to bottom left...

Please forgive for little participation in the Soup...recovering from bad flu... :o( 



Feb.19.2020
Let the Pens Flow - Tanka
Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

Placed 3'rd...Thank you

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Bette Bavington February 29, 2020 at 5:57 PM Sorry to hear your sick. In my prayers for a speedy recovery. Super Tanka.

Eve Roper February 25, 2020 at 10:23 PM Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf February 25, 2020 at 4:05 PM But I couldn't read it standing upside down! Maybe if I close one eye... LOL. Congrats, W.W! :) Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2020 at 12:35 PM - Bravo .... congratulations on your win W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas February 25, 2020 at 9:56 AM Deep poem.. wonderful alliteration.. Congrats on your placement..

Carolyn Devonshire February 24, 2020 at 3:09 PM I hope you're feeling better now, WW. It's really incredible the way your wonderfully alliterative tanka can be read forward and backward. Stunning! Surely a winner in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit February 20, 2020 at 4:03 PM Amazing my friend--how you can write so your poems can be read backward as well--well done, WW. All the best.

Kim Rodrigues February 19, 2020 at 8:08 AM Deep thoughts!