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Skewing Realities

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Raped realities raw reverberating realms dimensions divide expanding echoes entwined limitless levitating. 5 lines only with syllable count 5/7/5/7/7 ...this Tanka can also be read backward...from bottom-right to top-left or top right to bottom left... Please forgive for little participation in the Soup...recovering from bad flu... :o( Feb.19.2020 Let the Pens Flow - Tanka Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas Placed 3'rd...Thank you

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Bette Bavington

Date: 2/29/2020 5:57:00 PM

Sorry to hear your sick. In my prayers for a speedy recovery. Super Tanka.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/25/2020 10:23:00 PM

Congratulations!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/25/2020 4:05:00 PM

But I couldn't read it standing upside down! Maybe if I close one eye... LOL. Congrats, W.W! :) Gershon

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2020 12:35:00 PM

- Bravo .... congratulations on your win W.W. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 2/25/2020 9:56:00 AM

Deep poem.. wonderful alliteration.. Congrats on your placement..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/24/2020 3:09:00 PM

I hope you're feeling better now, WW. It's really incredible the way your wonderfully alliterative tanka can be read forward and backward. Stunning! Surely a winner in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/20/2020 4:03:00 PM

Amazing my friend--how you can write so your poems can be read backward as well--well done, WW. All the best.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/19/2020 8:08:00 AM

Deep thoughts!