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Skew - Whiff

When life has gone skew-whiff And best laid plans have gone awry When everything is topsy turvy And you're winging it on the fly There is something you can do To rectify the situation Don't waste another moment Go and run off on vacation It's a radical approach Not to stay and tough it out And instead hope problems disappear When you are not about Lying under a palm tree Drinking pina coladas while you read May not change your problems - But its probably what you need

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Date: 10/3/2023 1:18:00 PM
sounds like a wonderful idea, julie! i enjoyed your poetic advice...
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Julie Draper
Date: 10/4/2023 2:15:00 AM
Thank you Ilene :)
Date: 10/3/2023 1:08:00 PM
I'll pass on the adult beverage but I can hang with some palm trees and a hammock:) Great to read you again young lady. Hoping you are well.
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Julie Draper
Date: 10/4/2023 2:19:00 AM
Hi there Daniel, good to hear from you :) we've had the longest winter everrrrrr in NZ. Sunshine beckons :)
Date: 10/3/2023 4:38:00 AM
Great advice! Seconded as a solid plan :)
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Julie Draper
Date: 10/4/2023 2:16:00 AM
Fiji is calling me.... :) thanks dilly dally

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