Sketch of Sorrow, a Mermaid's Tale

her obdurate scales no longer silk (once kaleidoscopic), worn from tides that led her to a stagger stone, she left the ocean to be alone; unyielding waters wide parted when she cried- no ocean could atone
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pale and barren, she wore nudity like soft chiffon enveloped in lace- long auburn hair flowing down to the lowest part of her soft back, with waves highlighted from the sun; for beauty was worn inside and out- she knew not why her eyes wept, nor why she wanted solitude; she laid upon that stone to be alone- for no ocean could atone
September 23, 2019 Line Gauthier Mermaids Poetry Contest
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Horne Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 11:28 AM
this is so cleverly written, sad but beautiful
Lamoureux Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:44 AM
Perhaps she needs a calmer ocean so that she might gaze upon her reflection. This is a good metaphor for women in general. Although we see their beauty women rarely see their own. When a woman is truly loved they see their beauty reflected in their lover’s eyes.
Chiri Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 5:44 AM
Wow Laura amazing as always! I will be back with congratulations a bit laters!;)
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2019 at 8:04 PM
So sadly beautiful... poignant and soft and sensual. Simply beautifully expressed - God bless you
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