Skeletons

I sit On a coach made of leather
......
While she sits on a dust of mud and feathers


I walk under the cool breeze of the sun
.....
While she hangs an empty bucket on her head for a run


I dust the crumbs of leftovers
...
While she feeds the peace of her slumber


I travelled on wings over the blue
..
While her living in time is but a flu

     

     Take my hand Africa
   Take Your skeletons With you
  And embrace hunger

Even in death
.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Chu Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 6:16 PM
So you did use that idea, huh. WOW. I really liked this, Saj. VERY nice write. FAVORITES!
Brown Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 3:24 AM
Congratulations on your win in Sami's contest Sajdah. Love, Carol
Chu Avatar
August 2, 2009 at 3:17 PM
I like. You going to put this into Sami Al-khalili's "A Piece of Bread Please" contest?
Loveless Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 6:02 PM
beautiful babygirl. i love this saj.
Freakasso Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 3:16 AM
very,very interesting write! I enjoyed it. And thank U for your powerful comment also. It was really encouraging.Rgds,Prince
Crisci Avatar
July 17, 2009 at 7:53 AM
Hi! Thank you for you comment on my poem. o. The verses in my poetry are are inspired by the experinces, either good or bad, I have gotten from life. It amazes me ,sometimes, how I can pen down such thoughts! It must be the source of spirituality and wisdom within my soul. I love your poem, "Skeletons," it reminds me of the stark reality of Africa. May god bless you always. I wish you success in your poetry endeavors. Warm Regards, Andrew.
Kendrick Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 1:15 PM
Interesting Rhyme. Sara
Arteaga Avatar
July 15, 2009 at 10:28 AM
liked it good ending.
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