Skeleton Thin

Well tickle me bum and call me Lucy Got really great news, pay attention, it's juicy Seems to lose weight All you need do is wait Eventually you'll be skeleton thin, quite spooky
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Turner Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 2:07 PM
Lucy is Jack's girl name, when you play his bum tickle game, seems rather strange, watching him change, from a dirty old man to a dame:)
Ellison Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Don't knock it if you haven't tried it!!! LOL
Flats Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 7:25 AM
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Flats Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 7:57 AM
I blame the ? on the neanderthal internet service:-)
Ellison Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 7:34 AM
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January 11, 2017 at 7:23 AM
Hello Lucy! I won't tickle your bum//but I'll write another lim'rik dumb//good at that//somewhat fat//I can't lose weight by drinking rum. WEIGHT ON JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
January 11, 2017 at 7:33 AM
Lucy here!!! RUM??? Yuk! Not a fan... but not an indulger of any of that stuff! Pure as the driven s---!!! HAVE A GOOD'UN JOHN JOHN!!!!!
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