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Skeleton Thin

Well tickle me bum and call me Lucy Got really great news, pay attention, it's juicy Seems to lose weight All you need do is wait Eventually you'll be skeleton thin, quite spooky

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Daniel Turner

Date: 1/11/2017 2:07:00 PM

Lucy is Jack's girl name, when you play his bum tickle game, seems rather strange, watching him change, from a dirty old man to a dame:)

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/11/2017 2:26:00 PM

Don't knock it if you haven't tried it!!! LOL

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/11/2017 7:25:00 AM

Lim'Rik Flats
Date: 1/11/2017 7:57:00 AM

I blame the ? on the neanderthal internet service:-)

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/11/2017 7:34:00 AM

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 1/11/2017 7:23:00 AM

Hello Lucy! I won't tickle your bum//but I'll write another lim'rik dumb//good at that//somewhat fat//I can't lose weight by drinking rum. WEIGHT ON JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/11/2017 7:33:00 AM

Lucy here!!! RUM??? Yuk! Not a fan... but not an indulger of any of that stuff! Pure as the driven s---!!! HAVE A GOOD'UN JOHN JOHN!!!!!