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Skeletal Trees Silhouette

My life, in darkness Skeletal trees silhouette Decaying, left and right I shuffle through the fallen My light, soon to be consumed http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-14.php

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Date: 5/19/2011 12:54:00 PM

Good use of imagery to give the reader a feel of what you are conveying. Creative title caught my attention. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a great day! Karen

James Foulk

Date: 5/19/2011 11:16:00 AM

a great write, very creative piece, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on 1957.

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/19/2011 5:02:00 AM

Stunning Tanka James, I especially love your title :) hope your week's been great thus far x0x0x

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/18/2011 8:27:00 PM

Curious as to this link.....hmmmm? I saw your book review of Carolyn's poetry book...I think I will ask for her book based upon your review. Nice tanka, James.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/18/2011 2:07:00 PM

wow hope you are not THIS sad [good write] seems to be some universal funk going around, thanks so much for your in put on my blogs! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2011 1:52:00 PM

wow, James, is this for a contest?? It is awesome. One of your best!!

Deb Radke

Date: 5/18/2011 1:05:00 PM

Yes. This is life, stripped to the bare. Very good, my friend. Love, Deb