James Fraser Poet Tanka

Skeletal Trees Silhouette

My life, in darkness
Skeletal trees silhouette 
Decaying, left and right
I shuffle through the fallen
My light, soon to be consumed









http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/life-14.php

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May 19, 2011 at 12:54 PM Good use of imagery to give the reader a feel of what you are conveying. Creative title caught my attention. Thank you for your kind comment. Have a great day! Karen

James Foulk May 19, 2011 at 11:16 AM a great write, very creative piece, enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on 1957.

Wilma Neels May 19, 2011 at 5:02 AM Stunning Tanka James, I especially love your title :) hope your week's been great thus far x0x0x

Gwendolen Song May 18, 2011 at 8:27 PM Curious as to this link.....hmmmm? I saw your book review of Carolyn's poetry book...I think I will ask for her book based upon your review. Nice tanka, James.

Debbie Guzzi May 18, 2011 at 2:07 PM wow hope you are not THIS sad [good write] seems to be some universal funk going around, thanks so much for your in put on my blogs! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich May 18, 2011 at 1:52 PM wow, James, is this for a contest?? It is awesome. One of your best!!

Deb Radke May 18, 2011 at 1:05 PM Yes. This is life, stripped to the bare. Very good, my friend. Love, Deb