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Skeletal Trees

wheezed lungs of bare trees panting against tight winds--- breath of moon dilates

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/14/2014 10:06:00 AM
soupmail one last time!!
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Date: 7/19/2012 7:44:00 AM
I LOVE this haiku...going to my favorite list. :)
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Date: 7/12/2012 2:43:00 PM
Lovely, congrats.
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Date: 7/12/2012 1:38:00 AM
'wheezed lungs', ha! What a pictorial way to put it! Nice!
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:37:00 PM
Nette, a nice little sweet win, congratulations with hugs~LUV*PD
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Date: 7/11/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM.
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Date: 7/11/2012 6:34:00 AM
Nette congrats on your win..excellent..David
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Date: 7/11/2012 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Nathan's "Skeleton Tree" contest Nette. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2012 2:08:00 PM
A stark picture indeed. Super wrote. mette. Love, daver
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Date: 7/5/2012 7:20:00 PM
"wheezed lunds" i saw the image!
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Date: 7/5/2012 2:46:00 PM
Wow....excellent!!!!!
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Date: 7/5/2012 1:22:00 PM
WOW!!! nette, i disagree!! your's is fantastic! i think mine is the one that pales in it's shadow! lol Awsome write...winning wishes...love ya, deb
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Date: 7/5/2012 1:17:00 PM
I am so in love with this beautiful write! Your description is perfect, right on the spot! I feel like I was that tree in the night! What a gorgeous poem my friend! I love this astounding write Nette! Excellent Work!!
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