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Skeletal Figure


The house looked so imposing 
and majestic from outside
with a wide yard and a porch
 surrounded by ornamental railings.
It was situated on a hill 
with pine trees partly covering it from view.
Rumor runs, at night from there,
 people hear a strange wailing.

          
 Scoffing it as the weird fancy of fevered minds,
 I was bent on proving the irrationality of it.
 One night I ascended the hill
 leading to that cozy mansion.
I looked in and around with the spirit
of a rationalist or a skeptic.
A light gleamed from inside,
and I could see the surroundings clearly 
Close to the house but safely distant, 
I noticed a narrow fissure hemmed by wild bushes

Though I walked around over and again, 
nothing seemed unusual about it.
When I was about to leave 
as a proud victor after a thorough search,
i saw the fissure caving into a pit
and  a skeletal figure 
emerging from the pit
and rising into air wailing.
With a rattling sound,
it shook the dust off its cage of ribs.
There was no trace of flesh.
Had no wings, but arms like sticks
dangling down and raised up,
yet it cut through air like a dancing dervish.

My breath caught between dread and disbelief
and my heart hammering against my ribs,
in horror, as I looked on,
like a bird, on the pine branch, it did perch.

In that chilling moment, I took to my heels.
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Kendrick Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 4:14 AM
Way to go with this ghost and goblin story. It was alluring and got my attention and held it. You made the right choice by moving on. LOL..Thank you for sharing this one with us and if for a contest, it reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. 👍Sara K.
Dietrich Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 4:22 AM
Fantastic description, Valsa very imaginative ✍️
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 6:00 PM
totally engaging poem, filled with mystery and intrigue. I would've run as well :-)
Hind Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 4:31 PM
yeah, so would I - intriguing write
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