Skating On Frozen Lake

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A
Lake
Frozen
Inviting
The graceful skater
Circle in an exact line round
On one foot arms outstretched level glide, skirt moves with breeze
Preparing for competition,  winter games, what a sport this woman really loves
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
February 20, 2010 at 6:53 AM
Very apt piece for the training the skaters have done for the winter Olympics >> James
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February 17, 2010 at 9:16 PM
I have never seen anyone skate on a frozen lake, your poem describes it well..thanks on Cold Case...maybe a Part 2 and 3..hopefully a conviction...she is a Black Widow for sure..thanks Danny
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February 15, 2010 at 3:49 AM
A beautiful flowing write lovely Daniel
Strand Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:46 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara .Rgds Brian
Culverhouse Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 11:50 AM
sounds cold, I guess I think of my butt hitting the ice which it would often.
Chachere Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 10:37 AM
I love watching the Olympics. it so beautiful.<: -Always Lynette
Sweetheart Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 7:56 AM
Best of luck to all the Olympians .. participating in the games.. a wonderful poem on the beauty of ice skating and its gracefulness.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
Knop Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 5:29 AM
Wished I could skating, never learned it. Great selection of words, Sara! Thanks for sharing. And thank you for your comments..Gert
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2010 at 1:19 AM
You did a great job with this entry. I love ice skating and it's one of the few Olympic sports I can stand to watch. It was easy to decribe myself as my car. "She" bears my name on her license plate, Andie55 I even put up my baby's picture, with my FIRST blog today too!! LUv, Andrea
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February 13, 2010 at 8:29 PM
Very nice poem...and love this form...Enjoyed...Marty
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