Skaterboy's Delight

he rumbles over 
wet pavement with just one thought-
steamy kiss… sheer bliss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2012 at 5:26 AM
Here is another one of yours I really liked from before. As you can see I am up with my chronic pain and couldn't sleep. Might as well catch up here, I decided. yes, you have a great memory. It WAS Andie55 on those plates. (symbol of better years). Sure hope to see more new poems from you, Natalie. You are one of the few ladies here who is able to come up with super funny poems!!
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June 2, 2012 at 4:56 PM
oh my gosh, I was just talking with Susan or somebody today about what happened to Natalie!! and here you are. thanks for coming to one of my poems. I replied to you on it! Luv, andrea (get a new poem up)
Merryman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 3:45 PM
Cute haiku, Natalie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:06 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Natalie. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:04 PM
this one tells a most delightful tale. Congrats on your well deserved win, Natalie.
Sweetheart Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:42 PM
congrats Natalie on an awesome win for splendid words and imagery luv..
Taylor Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:06 AM
Congrats on your win, Natalie. Great job. Enjoyed. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
A   Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:50 PM
NATALIE~.Congratulations ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Poet Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 8:28 AM
Very romantic haiku by you Natalie.Thanks for your comment at my haiku HOMECOMING.That is not a true story.That was for Tracie's photo based contest.Thanks for your concern.
Mister Roboto Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 3:08 AM
So its "Kick push, Kick push, KISS....and COAST!"
Horsman Avatar
February 27, 2012 at 2:45 AM
wonderful form of poetry, for a awesome poem, enjoyed this, Natalie. harry
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 8:58 PM
what a cute poem, natalie. How ARE you?
Cooper Avatar
February 24, 2012 at 6:57 PM
love this natalie great haiku
Song Avatar
February 23, 2012 at 5:36 PM
What a romantic skater kid! A fun haiku..my first haiku with a skateboarder! You always have a California twist to things and I like it! GWendolen
Andresen Avatar
February 22, 2012 at 1:24 AM
Sweet haiku Natalie....good one. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 12:40 PM
Natalie, sheer delight..David
A   Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 12:20 PM
very humerous and sweet loved it ~always p.d.
Onclaud Avatar
February 19, 2012 at 9:50 AM
delightful way to end this 'ku, nat... impressive!.. :) huggs!
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