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Skateboarding

Sister Lucille enjoys skateboard riding Weather and her arthritis providing Lucille has skinned-up knees From banging into trees She has never mastered her colliding. Written July 14, 2022

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Ann Foster

Date: 7/15/2022 12:50:00 PM

I have not either... lol... I am a clutz... at times... but I still go. So much fun. I love Lucille... my kind of girl... Well done. Ann

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2022 1:51:00 PM

Thanks, Ann. She's purely fictional, but she's the kind of woman I really admire. Not afraid of adventure!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/15/2022 3:49:00 AM

Mastering your colliding is not easy!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2022 9:31:00 AM

I suppose not. I watch these kids do it and just marvel at their skills.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/14/2022 1:11:00 PM

Hey Milton: Fun to read about Lucille. At least she is up to having a go. Never give up. Best, SuZ

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 2:38:00 PM

So glad you are enjoyed the antics of Lucille, SuzD. She's a case and a half!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/14/2022 12:59:00 PM

very cute job of it. That contest should fill fast!!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 2:39:00 PM

I would think so, Andrea. I think we all enjoy writing a limerick now and then. I know I do.

Terry Flood

Date: 7/14/2022 12:24:00 PM

I’m contemplating whether Sister Lucille is your sister or a nun. Either way she’s a hell of a girl. Fun write, Milt. Terry

Terry Flood
Date: 7/14/2022 12:26:00 PM

Aha… just read your other Lucille Limerick and I see she’s your sister… skate boarding must just be her habit ;-)

Deb M

Date: 7/14/2022 12:20:00 PM

Very cute Limerick Milton. Debx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 12:57:00 PM

Thanks so much, Deb, I'm having a ball with Lucille!

Ann Foster

Date: 7/14/2022 12:10:00 PM

LOL... tell her to keep trying. Love this. Ann

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 12:57:00 PM

Oh, I'm sure she will. Lucille is not one to give up.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/14/2022 10:55:00 AM

She's a bit of a daredevil is Lucille lol, even a grazed knee doesn't stop her. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 12:57:00 PM

That she is, Tom. That she is!

Jeff Kyser

Date: 7/14/2022 10:09:00 AM

'Tis more enjoyment in a ride Where head and ground don't coincide! Ha, enjoyed this one, Milt!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2022 10:14:00 AM

'Tis so true, Jeff. Lucille does rather well considering her age. Most of us don't try those kinds of sports! I'm anxious to see what she will try next!