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Sixty Years - My Life - I Live

My life, I've lived...for sixty years Like you, some days...were filled with tears In life, I've tried, my best...be good To share, my love...with brotherhood Lassoed by satin's rope...a few Cut loose, myself...my whole life through To walk a path...in promise land In times of need... to lend my hand Sixty years, of life...I live Still, I've got so much more...to give Story Of My Life Poetry Contest (10 lines) Sponsor: Silent One 9-29-2019

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2019 1:39:00 PM

I enjoyed the story of your life, Charles. I think many can relate to it. I'm a bit older than you and 60 for me was not a good year!! I'm hoping it turns around soon!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2019 1:39:00 PM

by the way, thanks for my win in your contest. I was surprised and very happy to place third.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/19/2019 9:02:00 AM

Keep living friend. You might not be aware but I’m guessing you had help cutting that rope. Blessings Rick.

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/19/2019 8:27:00 AM

Glad you still hear, old buddy in this life...don't want you anywhere else lol...all the best my friend till the end...we're both the same old fart age lol...^WW^ :o)

Winged Warrior
Date: 10/19/2019 8:32:00 AM

...plus you don't look a day over 59 lol :o)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 10/8/2019 12:14:00 AM

G'day Charles … most certainly a story of life in so few lines - well done indeed Charles - Lindsay

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/6/2019 12:08:00 PM

- Charlie, congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/4/2019 4:59:00 PM

Hi Charles, May you live many more years. Congratulations on your winning write. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 10/4/2019 4:49:00 PM

Charles, this is one of my favs from the contest. Congrats!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/4/2019 3:58:00 PM

Congratulations for your win Charles :)

Silent One

Date: 10/4/2019 3:04:00 PM

You are never 60 years old, stop it! great poet. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/4/2019 1:54:00 AM

You certainly have so much more Charles, to give, i could read poetry as good as this forever.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/29/2019 1:15:00 PM

Happy Sixty years Charles - a lovely poem and I wish you many many more happy ones - people sometimes need a helping hand, bless you for being so giving! Hugs, Jennifer.

Kaveesha Ruwindi

Date: 9/29/2019 10:47:00 AM

Nicely penned. Enjoyed reading :) best of luck for the contest :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/29/2019 7:37:00 AM

This was a joy to read. I believe you will do great in the contest. Bless you

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/29/2019 7:32:00 AM

Very nice....so much giving and more to give. Well written :)