Sixty Years - My Life - I Live

My life, I've lived...for sixty years 
Like you, some days...were filled with tears 
In life, I've tried, my best...be good 
To share, my love...with brotherhood
 
Lassoed by satin's rope...a few 
Cut loose, myself...my whole life through 
To walk a path...in promise land 
In times of need... to lend my hand
 
Sixty years, of life...I live 
Still, I've got so much more...to give 


Story Of My Life Poetry Contest (10 lines)
Sponsor: Silent One 
9-29-2019

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Date: 10/19/2019 1:39:00 PM
I enjoyed the story of your life, Charles. I think many can relate to it. I'm a bit older than you and 60 for me was not a good year!! I'm hoping it turns around soon!
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Date: 10/19/2019 1:39:00 PM
by the way, thanks for my win in your contest. I was surprised and very happy to place third.
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Date: 10/19/2019 9:02:00 AM
Keep living friend. You might not be aware but I’m guessing you had help cutting that rope. Blessings Rick.
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:27:00 AM
Glad you still hear, old buddy in this life...don't want you anywhere else lol...all the best my friend till the end...we're both the same old fart age lol...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 10/19/2019 8:32:00 AM
...plus you don't look a day over 59 lol :o)
Date: 10/8/2019 12:14:00 AM
G'day Charles … most certainly a story of life in so few lines - well done indeed Charles - Lindsay
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Date: 10/6/2019 12:08:00 PM
- Charlie, congratulations on your 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:59:00 PM
Hi Charles, May you live many more years. Congratulations on your winning write. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/4/2019 4:49:00 PM
Charles, this is one of my favs from the contest. Congrats!
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Date: 10/4/2019 3:58:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Charles :)
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Date: 10/4/2019 3:04:00 PM
You are never 60 years old, stop it! great poet. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 10/4/2019 1:54:00 AM
You certainly have so much more Charles, to give, i could read poetry as good as this forever.
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Date: 9/29/2019 1:15:00 PM
Happy Sixty years Charles - a lovely poem and I wish you many many more happy ones - people sometimes need a helping hand, bless you for being so giving! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/29/2019 10:47:00 AM
Nicely penned. Enjoyed reading :) best of luck for the contest :)
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:37:00 AM
This was a joy to read. I believe you will do great in the contest. Bless you
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Date: 9/29/2019 7:32:00 AM
Very nice....so much giving and more to give. Well written :)
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