Sixty

Your broken leg serves a pillar of gallantry in defenselessness

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Beata Agustin

Date: 4/2/2024 11:53:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/26/2016 8:21:00 PM

Excellent haiku David

David Aaron
Date: 3/29/2016 12:37:00 PM

Thank you, Nayda.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/18/2016 4:17:00 AM

- A great one, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

David Aaron
Date: 3/20/2016 1:39:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2016 9:54:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by my work..Sara

David Aaron
Date: 3/8/2016 1:54:00 PM

Thank you Sara. I am really enjoying your poems, so I'll be returning.

Constance La France

Date: 3/8/2016 7:35:00 AM

David, oh lover of haiku, it is a wonderful form and I really like this one, thought provoking , 7 ~

David Aaron
Date: 3/8/2016 1:54:00 PM

Thank you so much.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2016 2:41:00 PM

We all have a broken limb of some kind don't we..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

David Aaron
Date: 3/5/2016 12:07:00 AM

Absolutely. I can't think of anyone who hasn't at some time broken a spiritual 'limb.' Thanks for so much excellent poetry. I'll be visiting your work again.