Sixty

Your broken leg serves
a pillar of gallantry
in defenselessness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
April 2, 2024 at 11:53 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 8:21 PM
Excellent haiku David
Aaron Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Thank you, Nayda.
Andresen Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 4:17 AM
- A great one, David - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Aaron Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Thank you so much.
Kendrick Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by my work..Sara
Aaron Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thank you Sara. I am really enjoying your poems, so I'll be returning.
La France Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 7:35 AM
David, oh lover of haiku, it is a wonderful form and I really like this one, thought provoking , 7 ~
Aaron Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 1:54 PM
Thank you so much.
Kendrick Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 2:41 PM
We all have a broken limb of some kind don't we..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Aaron Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 12:07 AM
Absolutely. I can't think of anyone who hasn't at some time broken a spiritual 'limb.' Thanks for so much excellent poetry. I'll be visiting your work again.
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