Six Thousand Miles

Whispering lies that tickle my ears. 
I told you I loved you, you tell me your fears. 
A life filled with sadness, but now a new start. 
I pledge my commitment, you're subtlety an art. 
Dance around issues, I listen you speak. 
You see it as weakness, when only I'm meek. 

I ask if you're ready, you give me a promise. 
I sense the lies hiding, you tell me you're honest. 

I ignored my gut feeling, my greatest regret. 
A country to cross, I start feeling the threat. 
You stopped saying those words, unsettling fear. 
You say we have to talk, as I'm growing ever near. 
I changed my whole life, only hours away. 
A city cast in shadow, as you broke off that day. 
Mistakes floating in air, no blame to be cast. 
Your lies fill my dreams, no forgetting the past. 

Two weeks and you're gone, one more week I can't stay. 
My soul and my heart were ripped from me that day. 

A shell of the man that I used to be. 
Drove back across mountains seeing all I could see. 

But nothing compared to the beauty of your smile. 
It's all I could think, mile after mile. 

I thought I was lucky for the time we shared. 
But of course it's a curse, dreaming what isn't there. 

A tragedy it's clear, the lies I was told. 
A heart so empty, your love only cold. 

Abusive and cruel, you feared what would change. 
I would see you, "the truth", I would leave just the same. 

So return to the pain, you swore he meant nothing. 
A cheater, with lies, all along you'd been bluffing. 

So every night as I write, you sleep peaceful in bed. 
But of course I can't sleep, you're rent free in my head.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 5/7/2012 11:49:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Major. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/7/2012 4:51:00 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome, Carol
Date: 5/4/2012 5:00:00 AM
Major welcome to the soup, very descriptive emotionally, I like it..David
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Major H
Date: 5/4/2012 3:22:00 PM
Thanks David
Date: 5/3/2012 9:59:00 AM
Wow, I can so relate to this. I am in the exact same boat. I really enjoyed how it kept unfolding into another epic piece of your love. I have been lied to so badly to the point of screaming ENOUGH ! I love you but this dance is not one I know. I am the type it takes a lot to hurt me, years and years for some, but then one day just out of the blue, I may hear or see a trigger word and I will flat let go and LEAVE! Even family so I get this.
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Major H
Date: 5/3/2012 11:37:00 AM
Thanks Danielle.. This is a very personal poem for me, so I'm glad the emotion came through sincere enough to be relatable.
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