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Six Seconds

Breathe in, breathe out You wish life was that easy In one, two, three Take in your colourful pills Then four, five, six You’ll fall into a never-ending sleep…

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James Inman

Date: 2/18/2018 8:20:00 AM

Life is neither good nor bad. Life is indifferent. It is those who live it that make it what it is. It can be very difficult at times but extremely beautiful soon after. I have known people who have fought with all of their strength through what appeared to be insurmountable odds and made a beauty life for themselves. I have known those with what seems to be every advantage throw it away. You have to decide. It is not easy but depression can be controlled. A deep write andrea.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/17/2018 1:06:00 PM

Hello Andrea, good advice in this poem.Yep! Breath in,breath out. Have a nice day my friend.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 1/26/2018 11:06:00 AM

Another nice written poem but life is really hard, it s a series of happy and bad moments, basically it s a test. The God is testing us, sometime He ll test us by making us happy, giving us everything and sometimes he ll test us by taking everything from us, by giving us pain but we just need to Reme Him and pass this test so that our afterlife must be better, a veey nice poem

Karen Croft

Date: 8/17/2017 11:33:00 AM

I wish life was just that easy as breathing. Nice poem!