Six Seconds

Breathe in, breathe out
You wish life was that easy
In one, two, three
Take in your colourful pills
Then four, five, six
You’ll fall into a never-ending sleep…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Life is neither good nor bad. Life is indifferent. It is those who live it that make it what it is. It can be very difficult at times but extremely beautiful soon after. I have known people who have fought with all of their strength through what appeared to be insurmountable odds and made a beauty life for themselves. I have known those with what seems to be every advantage throw it away. You have to decide. It is not easy but depression can be controlled. A deep write andrea.
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 1:06 PM
Hello Andrea, good advice in this poem.Yep! Breath in,breath out. Have a nice day my friend.
Ajmal Avatar
January 26, 2018 at 11:06 AM
Another nice written poem but life is really hard, it s a series of happy and bad moments, basically it s a test. The God is testing us, sometime He ll test us by making us happy, giving us everything and sometimes he ll test us by taking everything from us, by giving us pain but we just need to Reme Him and pass this test so that our afterlife must be better, a veey nice poem
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August 17, 2017 at 11:33 AM
I wish life was just that easy as breathing. Nice poem!
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