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Six Months

Almost six months into my death I remembered why I had died. And the way I ended up Was tantamount to suicide. It was meant more as a symb'lic Demonstration of my worth Because a friend who does forget things Is deservéd not of mirth. My brain creates another you In every girl I see. You're every girl he's walking with And every guy is me. Believe me when I say That I am not that type of man. It scares me to believe I'd e'er Replace you with new friends.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/19/2012 1:09:00 PM
Wishing you would grace us with some new poetry soon. You are missed Jonathan. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2011 10:17:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this afternoon Jonathan. I hope you will always find the inspiration to continue your writing. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/4/2009 7:57:00 PM
i love this peoms cuz you show how much u care about her to never want to replace her i hope she cherish the friendship n love u have for her
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Date: 2/18/2009 5:33:00 AM
Some great writing here. The first two lines were fantastic...threw you into the poem. Keep up the good work
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