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Situation Haiku

two things that can kill
religion and racisim
the powers of hell


voices in Egypt
it's a new birth of freedom
Magna Carta style


will they resist change
shall they put freedom in chains
does choice have a name

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 2/21/2012 8:58:00 PM

I think humans are the only ones on the planet who kill their own kind. I can feel the qanger in your poem and rightly so.

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 2/18/2011 8:02:00 AM

Indeed a true situation, please sir, gaze into Nigeria and have Ur say on it's situation, like u deed in Egypt.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/12/2011 10:28:00 PM

egypt still in shackles but fighting ... ragingly beautiful work, TS.. :) huggs, nette

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/12/2011 9:08:00 AM

come to find out change did come. funny it came after the King holiday. i wonder if anybody noticed the corelation between the two. the peaceful protest as a way of changing the world. JHL

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/11/2011 5:24:00 PM

I believe these three entries are closer to senryus. Nevertheless, they are all very descriptive.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 2/11/2011 7:16:00 AM

I like your series of Haiku's. Yes, I pray the people of Egypt will get their freedom. God Bless phyl

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/2/2011 7:17:00 PM

topical, to the point....well done! Situation! jimbo

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2011 12:51:00 PM

TS, you have summed up so well the situation occurring now in Egypt. My prayers go out to the people who want to remain free. You first verse is particularly strong. I feel the same way. Thanks for sharing this thought-provoking haiku series. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2011 11:51:00 AM

Yes Situation.. a potent situation it truly is a life changing experience for the entire World..nicely written.. and thankxxx so very much for your wonderful comment on my WHO CARES??? poem... u were right.. someone had touched a nerve deeply and so I felt a retort and expressed it luv... will never change my poetry ..not one line or word for anyone... an original creation is writ in stone far as the "Sweetheart" is concerned... appreciate the luv my friend.. and warm and always welcome comments

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/30/2011 9:34:00 AM

With a chaos in Egypt at the moment, your haiku series is quite thought provoking.. Great write

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/28/2011 6:40:00 AM

Ultra true Situation.. what did u mean by your comment on my SUCCULENCE... ??? am pretty keen but lost in your words luv.. and luv is the thing that enhances religion and embraces racism and the powers of hell hate luv.. so.. please let me know how SUCCULENCE affected u luv..thankxx ..happy weekend..