Sitting on the dock

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sitting on the dock
coffee mug in hand ~
still half asleep



AP: Honorable Mention 2025

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/15/2019 8:48:00 AM

If you do not have a dock, I would be very surprised, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2019 11:36:00 PM

Indeed, Caren.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/13/2019 3:47:00 PM

You would often find me in that position, while I come back to earth, Line! Coffee and I are very good friends! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2019 11:36:00 PM

So you should be, Paul. Thanks.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/12/2019 2:18:00 PM

I immediately pictured the individual pitching forward right into the water. Perhaps that would reclassify him as 'half-wake.' LOL. Ta-ta, Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2019 3:10:00 PM

Cup half full half empty. Very witty Gershon!

Chris Green

Date: 9/12/2019 1:24:00 PM

Sounds like the perfect start to a day to me. : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 9/12/2019 1:47:00 PM

Absolutely, Chris.