Sitting In the Lobby To Read

His moustache was long and black,
silky at the ends, shiny almost,
slick with gel to keep the ends
turned up in a smile, even when
his lips didn't match.  They look
like shoestring ends, she thought,
all perfectly pulled together on
either size of a bulbous nose.
She never asked his name, just
watched as he strode with
purpose through the lobby of the 
hotel she liked to sit in, reading.
His hair was short, salt and
pepper, some would say, but she
didn't use spices, so she wasn't
sure.  Not white like snow, not
black like tar, but in between,
like a new snowfall driven over
by dirty cars.  She stared, just
a little too long and he turned his
head and smiled, wide gappy
yellowing teeth screamed at her
from underneath the black stache.
She turned to her book and read.
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Hankins Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 9:33 PM
This is exceptionally fine writing, Juli. I loved the description of the man, right down to his "yellowing teeth!" Tells a story. Good stuff!
Leffanta Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 11:18 AM
Reality can be a disappointment to readers . . . .
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