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Sitka Sunset Blues

A lazy eventide Sitka Sunset Where the invisible stairway to heaven Splashes a touch of oil paint on deep blues As I watch Helios blend radiant commands How many more Alaskan sunsets must one perform? Purple psychedelic hues Greets lucid pink flowing into valleys of honey Performing a mirrored solo masterpiece on the lake Streaming rapturous sounds of richness From stratospheric multi-coloured basslines Hues so dense, one could cut into fine strips Meets with standing ovation As mere mortals gaze high from their amphitheatres Mouthing the sweet syrup that pours from my haze Succulent tongue burning coolness Like an overused plectrum Encased within Aurora’s twang of fusion An instrument without strings The Goddess whose aura never sets I, should ask for a raise 29/05/23

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W J Clarke

Date: 6/23/2023 1:07:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and for your detailed comments Gary. Very much appreciated. The poem was definitely written with musical elements in mind. I attempted to subtedly incorporate an eclectic mix of blues and heavy metal to set the scene. It is really encouraging to receive analysis more or less along the same lines (music genre) from both you and Craig :-)

Gary Radice

Date: 6/22/2023 12:56:00 PM

I read Craig's blog and your comment so felt the need to read your poem. I love it! Maybe just my interpretation of things but I felt there were references to some great bands and musicians here..Led Zeppelin, Deep Purple's 'Smoke on the water' Ritchie Blackmore (Deep Purple and Rainbow .."multi coloured bass lines..") There's possibly a "Purple Haze" in there too (Hendrix) and Pink Floyd...Aurora..heavy metal singer/ dj??..Of course I may be way off key here with all these notes but that's what I just love about poetry. :) Cheers - Gary

W J Clarke
Date: 6/23/2023 1:08:00 PM

Craig Cornish
Date: 6/23/2023 10:01:00 AM

So very true Gary, great pick-ups on those! That is the kind of perception that make seductive ambiguity worthwhile/fun! BTW, I think you're right on the mark here.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/20/2023 9:03:00 PM

Beauty encased in images of purple and rose pink that lazily stretches out across the Sitka horizon. Having grown up in the northwest summer twilight does indeed progress in its own sweet time! Delightful twist at the end. Congratulations on your win! Love your voice as the sunset! Blessings.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/20/2023 9:02:00 PM

Beauty encased in images of purple and rose pink that lazily stretches out across the Sitka horizon. Having grown up in the northwest summer twilight does indeed progress in its own sweet time! Delight twist at the end. Congratulations on your win! Love your voice as the sunset! Blessings.

W J Clarke
Date: 6/21/2023 2:19:00 AM

Thank you very much Sam :-)