Sit Down By the Bridge

sit down by the bridge
listen to the babbling brook
close my eyes and dream
imagine fairies dancing
and riding the backs of fish


Jack Horne, written on 1st June for Constance's Rippling Stream contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
June 9, 2011 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Jack. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
June 8, 2011 at 1:37 AM
super cheers for the fine spot. jack! :) huggs
Mehta Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 9:56 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, jack
Poet Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 6:52 AM
Congrats jack on your win.
La France Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 10:21 PM
Congratulations Jack, on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:56 PM
gleaming cheers to you, jack for the win! :) huggs
Sweetheart Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:42 PM
Congrats Jack on your terrific win in Constance's contest with this awesome write my friend..enjoy with luv..
Poet Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 9:17 AM
Wonderful Write from you Jack...best wishes...
Neels Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 7:04 AM
A beautiful gem Jack, good luck for Constance's contest :) WN
Dietrich Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:02 PM
sweet little poem, Jack. It's always nice seeing you here at Soup.
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:39 PM
Wonderful interpretation of the pictute of the contest, good luck, jack
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 4:18 PM
super creation Jack.. each line brings essence to that particular hing.. good luck in the contest...a treasure to read luv..
Kendrick Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 3:28 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one that reads like a winner to me..I will have to check this contest out..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Princess is doing well, growing, gaining weight, and developing more attitude..Thanks for asking..Sara
Guzzi Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:47 AM
You made me smile...I see no form errors HUZZAH! Thanks for the kind words! Light & Love
Roberts Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 10:40 AM
lovely entry Jack, good luck in the contest
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