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Sit Down By the Bridge

sit down by the bridge listen to the babbling brook close my eyes and dream imagine fairies dancing and riding the backs of fish Jack Horne, written on 1st June for Constance's Rippling Stream contest

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Date: 6/9/2011 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on a well deserved win in Constance La France's "Write Me A Rippling Stream" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/8/2011 1:37:00 AM
super cheers for the fine spot. jack! :) huggs
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this win in the contest of constance, jack
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:52:00 AM
Congrats jack on your win.
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Date: 6/5/2011 10:21:00 PM
Congratulations Jack, on your win in my contest with this beautiful poem~
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Date: 6/5/2011 9:56:00 PM
gleaming cheers to you, jack for the win! :) huggs
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Jack on your terrific win in Constance's contest with this awesome write my friend..enjoy with luv..
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Date: 6/2/2011 9:17:00 AM
Wonderful Write from you Jack...best wishes...
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Date: 6/2/2011 7:04:00 AM
A beautiful gem Jack, good luck for Constance's contest :) WN
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:02:00 PM
sweet little poem, Jack. It's always nice seeing you here at Soup.
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Date: 6/1/2011 6:39:00 PM
Wonderful interpretation of the pictute of the contest, good luck, jack
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Date: 6/1/2011 4:18:00 PM
super creation Jack.. each line brings essence to that particular hing.. good luck in the contest...a treasure to read luv..
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Date: 6/1/2011 3:28:00 PM
Good luck in the contest with this one that reads like a winner to me..I will have to check this contest out..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Princess is doing well, growing, gaining weight, and developing more attitude..Thanks for asking..Sara
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:47:00 AM
You made me smile...I see no form errors HUZZAH! Thanks for the kind words! Light & Love
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Date: 6/1/2011 10:40:00 AM
lovely entry Jack, good luck in the contest
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